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Dream On-2

Dream on Be it white rabbit holes of wonderlands Or black holes of never-here flounder lands , Dreaming on and on Vaunted webs they spawn In this ‘ uni-verse’ that ever expands*. Expanding like vapor, fluff and free verse In eccentric quest, new frontiers traverse Dreamlands roaming Ideas beaming Procreating, creating things diverse. Diverse, like what is extant, are all stuff From the nutsy-feverish heads of buffs Their ways are damn strange Their worlds like deranged Salt of earth, they are, above all rebuff. Kneading up, weeding and leading the earth Right , left or centre , ever, two cents worth Although they grandstand And get praised or panned Of their wisdom, world should not be in dearth. *Science tells that the universe keeps on expanding by itself. Black hole is a region in space- time whose gravity field is too strong for anything including light to escape from it. S.Jagathsimhan Nair 22 jul 2013, Limerick

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Date: 8/6/2013 2:34:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Jag!!
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Date: 8/6/2013 9:50:00 AM
a wonderful win Jag:-) Congrats... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/5/2013 8:25:00 PM
Cleverly done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:55:00 PM
Jag, Congratulations, In DG's "Dream On" contest... xox~ Linda
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Date: 7/29/2013 12:59:00 PM
love where you took this, comparing hollow space to the wonders of the universe... extraordinary, jag!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/26/2013 11:32:00 PM
Interesting limericks, my friend. I like the way you expounded on the universe.
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Date: 7/26/2013 5:22:00 PM
nice one! (:)
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Date: 7/26/2013 2:54:00 PM
This was so energetic and thought provoking... Great to read.
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