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Doggie View of a Territorial Miniature Eskimo

Hi, my name is Ollyver, and here’s my doggie view: You could call me simply “Boo” and I’d still come to you! I’m fluffy white, the mini version of an Eskimo. My human lady makes me go out back and then yells, “GO!” Sometimes she says more than that. She adds the small word, “pee.” “Ollyver, go pee,” she cries. “Just pee. Go pee for me!” Often times I’ll run about or try to dig a hole. Apparently my digging in the yard is not her goal! She calls me back and if I do not come, she chases me. Her voice bears a question and again, that dang word PEE. Inside the house, I sit near her - unless I hear strange noise, and often at the window, I’ll look out and see some boys. I start to yap. I HAVE to yap! I yap, yap, yap, yap, YAP. And when they leave, I run with glee back to my lady’s lap. I love to feel her scratch my ears and smooth my pretty fur. If someone comes too near the house, I’ll yap, protecting her. She doesn’t often give me yummy food right off her plate, but sometimes she might give me some, so anxiously I wait. I make my eyes get big and sad and whimper like a child. I can’t go too far overboard or else she will get riled! If food remains upon her plate, she scrapes it in my bowl. That’s even better than when I go out and dig a hole! There’s one thing I can’t figure out. She saw me tinkle once nearby a wall, then yelled about me pulling stupid stunts. She and her man get crazy when I do that, so I try to only tinkle in the house when it is on the sly! She takes me out to that back yard quite an awful lot. Sometimes I’ll tinkle and I always poo poo like I ought. More kids outside the window! Must I always have to beg for them to leave? I yap, and near the wall I lift my leg. Written June 24, 2012 For Tanya Harrington's "Dog Gone Tales" Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/6/2013 7:14:00 PM
This is nuts on every level yap yap yap yap yap lol, but brilliant
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Date: 8/14/2012 7:41:00 AM
Belated congratulations on this winning piece. I have enjoyed reading it. Soooo lovely! Thanks. hugs-leonora
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Date: 7/22/2012 10:00:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations in Tanya Harrington, "Dog gone tales" contest.. have your self a good night. ;-) always~PD
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Tanya's "Dog Gone Tales" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2012 4:50:00 PM
congrats Andrea on a great win for a fine entry on a dog's life..luv.. hope to be back full stram by next week,,, hope u r OK ..
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea, on your 2nd place win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/17/2012 12:04:00 PM
Andrea just a quick congrats on your win..David
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Andy at least they take you out for poo poo's xx
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Date: 7/16/2012 8:23:00 PM
This is so cute, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/16/2012 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations - knew it would do well.
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Date: 7/16/2012 4:08:00 PM
Very nice, funny... Congratulations on your win! Terry
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Date: 7/16/2012 4:00:00 PM
Hi Andrea! Nice tale here. Good ole' Oliver. Congrats!
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Date: 7/8/2012 11:50:00 AM
Enjoyed the dog tale told on this poem. love phyl
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Date: 6/28/2012 3:54:00 PM
Great long tail I mean tale that should be in the winners' circle..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and then comment with your uplifting comments...Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 6/28/2012 3:29:00 PM
Enjoyed this Dogs eye view Andrea, and best wishes winning wise.!
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Date: 6/28/2012 2:31:00 PM
As Ronnie Reagan said to Jimmy Carter...Theere you go again! Another winner for sure! VERY funny stuff! - Tim
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Date: 6/28/2012 10:09:00 AM
Hey, Olyver! A dog's life aint so bad. Try getting real, real old - can't poop,sometimes hard to pee, and no one hollers at ya. Got a kick out of this one, Andrea. Love, Dave
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Date: 6/26/2012 3:02:00 AM
oh so playful and charming, andie... enjoyed the yap, yap, yap... and the whole show!.. is this an eskimo dog??... fabulous write!...:) huggs!
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Date: 6/25/2012 9:23:00 PM
How could anyone resist THIS title! It's so SWEET!! Lovely phrasing... I especially like the first 'pee' couplet. Well done Andie!! Love, Keith :)
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Date: 6/25/2012 4:25:00 PM
this is just charming! i love the verse with all the "yaps" in it - very dr. seuss (and i mean that as the greatest compliment!). this should score very high in the contest - good luck!
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Date: 6/25/2012 3:51:00 PM
Great job, Ollyver. Outstanding entry. Reads like a winner. Good luck in the contest. Nice going. Hugs, Ralph
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Date: 6/25/2012 12:36:00 PM
nice story about your beloved dog Andrea...hugs...Joseph
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Date: 6/25/2012 12:31:00 PM
Hahaha...this is such a cute story told by a doggie...enjoyed very much.
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Date: 6/25/2012 12:17:00 PM
Cute one Andrea...once I had a German Shepard and I named it Dracula...but he was very friendly though...lol. Enjoyed your poem, best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/25/2012 12:09:00 PM
You have a cute dog Andrea......Wish you luck in contest. - Well done ! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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