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July- 18- 2024
E form- Elegy Poetry Contest
Sponsor-  Constance La France
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“When the pen falls silent that once danced to the muse’s command and when the poet’s heart no longer beats with rhyme, we realize that the poet in us is dead. It is a sad truth difficult to reckon.” ~ By Poet Far from the din of madding crowd, And away from the bustle of city streets, I withdrew into a solitary spot, To turn my thoughts into dazzling verse. Shelley and Shakespeare came in view, Emily and Eliot fell in line, Their verse ringing loud and clear, Their energy fanning fire within I dreamt of putting proper words, To clothe my thoughts in striking notes, Longed to pour my loaded heart, In powerful verse to move the hearts But as I started scrawling down, All that I had stored in hoards – Ebbed out into mere froth and foam, Leaving bits of broken thoughts I sallied out for a stunning theme, And stroked my pen to put it down, But topics eluded me one by one, Unable to decide on what to dwell, I rummaged my memory for apt words, And dallied round with lofty themes Yet nothing other than splintered thoughts, And hackneyed phrases came alive. I strained hard to give them life, And labored in vain to make them rhyme, ‘The Blazing Sun’ and ‘the Brilliant Star’, Both faded out with no trace of glow. I envisioned before me the Sacred Mount, To drink from the fountain gushing down, But hot lava spurted out, And the wings of fancy burnt outright! No Muse appeared to enliven me, Nor my fantasy lingered long, The words that once flowed like honey Dried up with no inspiration, coming to nourish. Staring blank into the scroll in front, Unable to scribble even a moving thought, Like a soldier vanquished in war, I put away my paper and pen. I greatly lament the death of the poet in me, And wonder if ever will have a rebirth!

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Date: 8/7/2024 1:36:00 PM
Valsa, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful elegy poem, I liked it a lot, well done, loved the quote too, Constance
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Date: 7/27/2024 10:04:00 AM
Breathtaking poem but not something that could ever happen to my dear, sweet friend Valsa. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/23/2024 6:45:00 PM
Started to writing an elegy on Shelley, Shakespeare, Emily, Eliot and ending with "I greatly lament the death of the poet in me, And wonder if ever will have a rebirth" - Great. A very beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/23/2024 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Death of a Poet" is a lovely write. Great quote... We can always have a rebirth.   Have a wonderful day writing away................
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Date: 7/22/2024 6:25:00 AM
Such an awesome depiction of a muse that has left the building lol. Seriously Valsa, we could never imagine this being true of you. You're a top notch poet here on PS and this poem proves it. Interestingly, the captcha says DRY. Ha!
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Date: 7/22/2024 12:59:00 AM
A lovely quote there dear V. This is such a true and amazing piece. I flowed with everything. The poet in me once died. I used to call it a long phase of writer's block. But it was dead. I was unable to even think about writing, or pick a pen because there was no emotional flare or anything happy to sail me through it and even the sad moments were too sad that it made me mute. I had that for 5 years. When I think of everything I could have accomplished within those 5 years. I weep. I would have-
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Valsa George
Date: 7/23/2024 4:28:00 AM
Dear Tonye, sorry to hear that you passed through such an arid state of mind. Depression can dry up all sources of creative imagination and deprive us of all creative urges and even the urge to live. So happy to know that you have come back to life. Now when you wield your pen you create magic. Don't regret about the wasted years. Strive to compensate for all that you have lost within the time at hand. Glad to know that Poetry Soup has given you a new lease of life. May your facile pen script more and more poems of worth. Thanks for sharing your feelings with us.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/22/2024 6:27:00 AM
Whew! Awesome comment
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Tonye George
Date: 7/22/2024 1:10:00 AM
tried. Probably taking advantage of my heartache and everything that happened. But I couldn't. I'm not one to deal with regrets. I try not to think of it. But I'm telling you that, poetry soup saved me. The support when I got back from my slumber. It was true, genuine and I picked myself up from where I drowned. It's back. ( The dead poet/Creative block) I have been fighting it for months. I go blank and the days move too fast, then I realise I haven't written. I come here and people check up. "When are you writing? We miss you." Those words keep and inspire me. Because it feels like a connection. My silent battles scream out. I spent the whole night trying to write a word and a thought hit me. "It's back. It really is.” This piece has touched me so dearly Valsa. Best wishes for the contest.
Date: 7/21/2024 5:36:00 AM
all poets are mortal even Shelley or Shakespeare, you did a wonderful job here, and inspiration will come very soon, take care yann
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Date: 7/19/2024 11:40:00 PM
The irony of beautiful poetry, loved this.
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Date: 7/18/2024 11:04:00 PM
Your lack of poetry created a poem so things are not too bad. An excellent wording of thoughts and, yes, a poem.
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Date: 7/18/2024 8:08:00 PM
deepened wordplay with reflective tones mark the beauty of this piece, valsa...I know your muse is just hibernating, the poet in you is alive and well!
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Date: 7/18/2024 12:31:00 PM
An excellent idea for the contest, I have so many poems for about the death of a poet... This is a heartfelt exploration of the highs and lows of the creative process. It vividly depicts the struggle for inspiration and the deep emotional impact of creative block, resonating with anyone who has faced similar challenges. The rich imagery and candid expression of frustration and longing make it a powerful and relatable piece.
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Date: 7/18/2024 10:57:00 AM
Nicely written elegy. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/18/2024 10:34:00 AM
I face this problem evryday in my life. My muse hass departed long time ago. I assemble my thoughts from my engineer's train of thoughts. Sometimes they look good, most of the time its is bad. The poet inside me died long time ago. Nice thoughts.
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Date: 7/18/2024 9:55:00 AM
"Far from the din of madding crowd, And away from the bustle of city streets, I withdrew into a solitary spot, To turn my thoughts into dazzling verse." -- Fantastic beginning...I was hooked. "Longed to pour my loaded heart, In powerful verse to move the hearts" -- Ain't that the truth! To say less would deny the heart's dream and vision. All have success and doubt. The poet verses his out. Love it!
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Date: 7/18/2024 6:08:00 AM
Love this, Valsa! We all have moments when we wonder if we can write another word, sufficiently, articulately, even one pittance of a haiku. ((hugs))
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Date: 7/18/2024 2:46:00 AM
I have those periods where my creativity seems to disappear then one day something will trigger it to come to life so I am sure that your muse will reappear as in the work above. Sometimes I have only a thought here and there, but then boom the words flow again. Of course, I think I read how Emily Dickinson just stopped writing one day. I don't know about the others. Sara K
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Date: 7/18/2024 2:23:00 AM
I loved this poem, especially the last two lines, for I lost all my poetry in this heat. You did well. Best for a win.
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Date: 7/18/2024 2:11:00 AM
It happens quite often when we're struggling to put words on paper and you wonder is this the end but more often than not a tiny spark ignites within you and you realise it wasn't dying but resting. Well written Valsa, no signs of dying in your verse, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 7/18/2024 2:08:00 AM
I love the cadence of your elegy dear valsa, poet within you would never die but sometimes can be overwhelmed and exhausted, but when muse is nowhere in sight one would feel these emotions that Youv penned in such rhythmic eloquence! I love the quote and also how youv expressed throughout! You did a unique elegy one that many can resonate with sometimes. When i am numb i feel like amateur poet within me dies too.“ The Blazing Sun’ and ‘the Brilliant Star’, Both faded out with no trace of glow. This is deserving of a fave! Just love it! Best wishes
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