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Written for the acrostic contest sponsored by Miranda H, for the song "Daystar" by Heritage Singers

Dreaming beneath sparkling skies, adorned with ice-blue sapphires. Yearning for an evergreen Eden~ saturated with tender celestial light, tailored with faith, erasing deceit, as the rose moon unfurls wisteria warmth, reviving wilted lilies with perfumed prose.

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 8/20/2024 7:41:00 PM

Beautiful imagery of romantic or maybe spiritual; I see hints of both. Congrats on your placement.

Miranda Hawley

Date: 8/18/2024 7:05:00 AM

Saphire skies and evergreen Eden are great colorful descriptions! Reviving wilted lilies, I mean just wow. Congrats on your win in my contest.

Ink Empress
Date: 8/18/2024 9:02:00 AM

thank you so very much truly, i loved doing this and im so happy you enjoyed reading it! Sending you light always

Silent One

Date: 7/30/2024 1:46:00 PM

As always you do the acrostic in your own unique style... Great use of opening words, metaphors and adjectives.... We all want to dream beneath sparkling skies adorned with ice blue sapphires... How beautiful and romantic would tha be... love the ending with how you have revived wilted lilies with perfumed prose... best of luck in the contest..

Ink Empress
Date: 7/31/2024 7:16:00 AM

Awwn thank you so much, you inspired me to do this

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/30/2024 6:06:00 AM

Dear Empress, After reading your insightful Acrostic I felt the longing for an ideal, pure world filled with beauty, hope, and spiritual renewal. Yes, I really think that many of us have a desire for a perfect, Eden-like existence free from deception and negativity. Good luck on the contest, and I believe you have a winner for sure. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Ink Empress
Date: 7/31/2024 7:17:00 AM

Dear daniel you are always so kind thank you for leaving your thoughtful and kind reviews always. Im truly grateful for your support

Valsa George

Date: 7/30/2024 2:21:00 AM

Your poetry is stunning both in short and lengthy form, whether it is acrostic or an elegy. You can deal with any topic and every poetic form, for poetry flows through your veins like life blood. We all yearn for an evergreen Eden. Let us hope that in the place of wilted lilies, newer ones will bloom. All the Best dear Empress.

Ink Empress
Date: 7/31/2024 7:17:00 AM

Awwn dear sweet valsa you are so kind truly im touched by your comment and um forever grateful for your kindness and support truly

David Crandall

Date: 7/29/2024 9:44:00 PM

Very nice Ink Empress, beautiful words!

Ink Empress
Date: 7/31/2024 7:18:00 AM

Ah thank you so much dear david appreciate your support truly

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/29/2024 9:04:00 PM

Absolutely gorgeous, Ink. This is a fave. :)

Ink Empress
Date: 7/31/2024 7:19:00 AM

Awwn thank you evelyn for the fave and also comment truly grateful

Paige Hind

Date: 7/29/2024 4:16:00 PM

Lovely alliteration... loved the part about erasing deceit <3

Ink Empress
Date: 7/31/2024 7:20:00 AM

Awwn thank you so much truly always

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/29/2024 10:39:00 AM

I'll always admire your alliteration. A delightful acrostic which deserves the best placement. So cleverly done.

Ink Empress
Date: 7/31/2024 7:20:00 AM

Thank you so much thats so kind of you dear victor im truly grateful

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/29/2024 6:23:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I will have to listen to the song. Sara K

Ink Empress
Date: 7/31/2024 7:21:00 AM

Awwn thank you dear sara appreciate your support truly

Tonye George

Date: 7/29/2024 6:17:00 AM

It's best to dream when the skies look surreal. Whether in real life or in our thoughts. I definitely want back the world where there's peace and honesty. Just eat, live and create memories. "Yearning for an evergreen Eden~saturated with tender celestial light." And true people who see themselves and love others. The world is full of many bad people and I keep wondering. What really went wrong. Why did they choose to be harmful and wicked. But there are lots of questions left unanswered dear Ink

Ink Empress
Date: 7/31/2024 7:27:00 AM

Awwn how thoughtful and kind and sincere is your comment dear tonye. I wonder the same and i wish the world would be a better more peaceful place for us all really. Thank you for your kind and generous visit, truly grateful

Tom Woody

Date: 7/29/2024 5:32:00 AM

I'm yearning for the evergreens of Eden too. Beautiful acrostic Inky

Ink Empress
Date: 7/29/2024 5:59:00 AM

I love how youv phrased it better hah ah i wish and pray for evergreen of Eden for us all. Thank you so much. Insta keepin me busy but i love soup better.

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 7/29/2024 5:17:00 AM

How do you write so well to every prompt . Day star . Wow

Ink Empress
Date: 7/29/2024 6:00:00 AM

Awwn thank u dahlin

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 7/29/2024 3:56:00 AM

Dreaming beneath sparkling skies, mmmm the way y make elements shine papi .,. adorned with ice-blue sapphires… seee!!! as the rose moon unfurls wisteria warmth, oooo sooo dreamy papi!! reviving wilted lilies with perfumed prose… mmm look at the elegance you bring aeee … wilted lilies … perfumed prose!!!! Mmmmm like biting into a piece of cake made in heaven!!! Gorgeous!!