Day Before Spring

gloomy late morning amidst ivy, bluebirds fly — tornadoes looming 3/19/2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2018 3:19:00 PM

Nice juxtaposition, Kim! Let me go see your melting poem now. I am so curious how to do that one!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2018 6:43:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/20/2018 4:00:00 AM

The tornado was a complete surprise. You have done so much with so few words, Kim. Well done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2018 7:31:00 AM

Thanks, Caren!

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/19/2018 10:02:00 PM

Great title for your haiku, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2018 10:36:00 PM

Thanks, Line :)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 3/19/2018 8:35:00 PM

We had a tornado watch here in northeastern Alabama but I think it has expired now thank God! Be safe wherever you are Kim! Awesome haiku!~Che :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2018 8:38:00 PM

Thanks! I heard thunder. I am in Georgia!

Mick Talbot

Date: 3/19/2018 7:43:00 PM

I can see the bluebirds, tornadoes, scary! Super haiku! Mick

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2018 8:39:00 PM

Thanks, Mick! I think God just blesses me with visuals. Today, I literally saw bluebirds flying into the ivy! Like that never happens! And there was more too but perhaps I will share in another Ku! <3

Jan Allison

Date: 3/19/2018 3:52:00 PM

very vivid imagery Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2018 3:57:00 PM

Thanks, Jan!