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Dawn of My Heart

Ordinarily I lie in my bed mentally grasping for any slender thread of slumber which I can possibly find to cling to! But there was one time - a morning of early April - when rising from bed, I felt an unusual urge to don my housecoat and walk out to the deck. In the stillness of pre-twilight, I stood there some time just gazing out at the vast valley and distant lake of my adopted homeland. Slowly, a sliver of lemon meringue began coloring the horizon. Drawn to dawn, I let myself succumb to the beauty of it all. A chorus of birds in nearby blossoming trees brightly chirruped, heralding Easter morning's illumination. On this day symbolic of redemption, I swear I heard the silence of angels’ song. Jan. 10, 2019 for the 'Free Verse Style Only' Poetry Contest of Emile Pinet and now for Richard Lamoureux Poem of the Day poetry contest POTD 1/13/19 Note: I felt happy, of course, to win this award. A few times in the past I had gotten POTD for poems I really did not feel deserved it, so I was pleased that I got the award for a poem I truly had felt good about after I wrote it!

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Date: 10/26/2020 10:34:00 PM
It was nice to come back to this one, which is obviously special to you. Your 4 lines in Greg's contest are beautifully composed, but it's even nicer to see the panorama from which it sprung. I loved it then and I love it now.
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Date: 8/14/2020 9:53:00 PM
This has a quieting effect on me, my friend. So glad you thought to refer me to this write. Nature is definitely God's way of speaking directly to our hearts, a truth I know you know all about. Glorious writing, belated congratulations for the POTD honors. A fav for me.
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Date: 4/28/2019 6:10:00 AM
I am back again with my congratulations on your deserving win with this wonderful poem Andrea. I have read through all of the winners and commented. What a treat! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/27/2019 6:26:00 PM
Andrea, a belated congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honor as well as your previous wins and podium placement in Richard's contest. So beautifully written, stirring and inspirational. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/25/2019 5:40:00 PM
Beautifully penned Andrea...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 4/25/2019 9:39:00 AM
I felt good about choosing this one Andrea. Congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 2/10/2019 11:17:00 AM
This is one of those poems that gently pulls the reader in, closing with a great ending line, which may seem ironic to the skeptically minded but profound to those of us who believe beyond our senses and intellects. Well done, Andrea!
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Date: 2/9/2019 6:36:00 PM
Beautiful, touched all my senses that in turn touch my heart. You took me there. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 2/9/2019 3:27:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and projection of feelings; verging on the ethereal, Andrea. Superb ending, too. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/1/2019 5:59:00 PM
Hello Andrea, all i can say is .......Wow! have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/1/2019 6:00:00 AM
You paint a beautiful picture!
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Date: 1/31/2019 1:28:00 AM
Dawn of my Heart A beautiful portrait of dawn and the feelings felt
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Date: 1/23/2019 7:09:00 AM
Great write Andrea. Each line a speed bump slowing the reader, ushering them into the beauty of this dawn.
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Date: 1/22/2019 4:40:00 PM
I’m happy to return with my warm congratulations for your wonderful win, Andrea. I enjoyed reading this again. Beautiful poetry. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/22/2019 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea! Your poem has placed "Third" in my PoetrySoup contest. It was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 1/22/2019 9:06:00 AM
Thanks so much. This is a dawn of surprise and delight!
Date: 1/18/2019 7:14:00 AM
Love, love, love this poem! Easily visualized. Great work!
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Date: 1/14/2019 3:45:00 PM
When dawn meets the heart, there's but light.. and love.. and a poem overflowing with beauty! Congratulations Andrea on your POTD. A recognition well earned.. My warmest wishes. Blessings.
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Date: 1/13/2019 12:24:00 PM
I am back to congratulate you on this serene piece. I miss two days because of my sore eyes and see today I missed you winning POTD! I am so happy for you my friend! I haven't been online as my little granddaughters have been with me since friday too. : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/13/2019 11:04:00 AM
Late congrats!!! Andrea on this beautiful write...well deserving of POTD!...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 1/13/2019 8:42:00 AM
- Congratulations on p.o.t.d., Andrea :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/13/2019 12:38:00 AM
I am officially stirred, moved and enjoying wonderful poetic awe-rushes. This free verse is a full package delivery (like that?). Awesome writing. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 1/12/2019 7:42:00 PM
Such beautiful images you paint with your words. I feel like I am there, in the moment. This is light, carefree and peaceful. Softly wrapping around me, and my heart. Congratulations Andrea, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 1/12/2019 6:32:00 PM
The beauty of dawn, of the morn and of your heart, is reflected in your inspired poem, Andrea. Brilliant! Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/12/2019 5:37:00 PM
Awesome, how you paint with your words, truly beautiful. Love, love, love the last three lines.
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Date: 1/12/2019 1:54:00 PM
I commented on this poem this morn, my comment has vanished. I say again, truly exquisite poetry, revealing the heart and soul of a true poet! A fav, a right and glowing gem.
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