Dawn

bird song fills the air and wood nymph bathes in dew drops - shy sparrow blushes

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2014 5:05:00 PM

this one is SO CLEVER. with the sparrow blushing at the end. Love it.

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/22/2014 7:25:00 PM

I can't always get up early enough to witness these kinds of things.

Linda Jackson
Date: 1/23/2014 11:00:00 AM

I like to get up early, but I do get insomnia quite a lot, Best wishes Linda x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2013 7:42:00 AM

I like this one..Very creative work..I can see the scene..Except that I have never seen a wood nymph..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 9/16/2013 3:42:00 PM

I absolutely love the imagery here...Beautiful!!!! :)