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Miranda Hawley's Christmas Tizzy Contest ~ December 12, 2024

It was Christmas Eve night and Santa was in a pickle when Dasher was caught giving Blitzen a quick tickle He and Dancer had been seriously dating for a year but his flirtatious ways had her crying tear after tear. Worried, Rudolph told Santa she refused to fly tonight if Dasher was going to be harnessed next to her in flight. "Oh, dear," said Santa. Now, what am I supposed to do?" Rudolph's nose was blinking as he said, "I haven't a clue." The sled was already loaded down with presents and toys waiting to be delivered to all the good little girls and boys. Santa had a new reindeer waiting at his first stop in Britain, a handsome one who winked at Dancer, and she was smitten.

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Date: 1/14/2025 9:43:00 AM
Back with Congratulation on your win. Sorry, I am late. I took a couple of days off. I enjoyed reading your fun/cute write again. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 1/13/2025 5:34:00 PM
Such a fun contest winner, Lin. And a little Christmas drama between deer makes for a fun poem, indeed!
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Date: 1/12/2025 7:01:00 AM
Great fix! I've always assumed all the reindeer are male so I'm glad you've given me a new perspective! Congratulations! Xo
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Date: 1/11/2025 2:25:00 PM
Nice one, Lin. Congratulations on your winning placement. Cheers from Canada and Happy New Year. Jim
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Date: 1/11/2025 2:10:00 PM
I agree with the person who remarked "just like a Hallmark movie in poetry! Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 12/13/2024 3:41:00 PM
Lin, OMG, just like a Hallmark movie in poetry. Really cute! Hope you are well!!
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Date: 12/14/2024 5:46:00 AM
lol Reindeer have love lives, too. Thanks, Duke.
Date: 12/12/2024 10:17:00 PM
A lovely happy ending Lin, love was certainly in the AIR tonight. Tom
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Date: 12/14/2024 5:46:00 AM
I had to make Dancer happy. Thanks, Tom.
Date: 12/12/2024 8:11:00 PM
That’s a lovely Christmas Tizzy Lin, cute picture too… Beryl
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Date: 12/14/2024 5:45:00 AM
Thanks a bunch, Beryl.
Date: 12/12/2024 11:52:00 AM
- Flirting technique almost always works ... a sweet Christmas poem, Lin :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 12/14/2024 5:45:00 AM
lol It's a given, Anne-Lise. Thanks.
Date: 12/12/2024 10:44:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun/cute write with a fun picture. What A Great Ending... Have a wonderful day writing away..............
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Date: 12/14/2024 5:44:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Paula.
Date: 12/12/2024 9:49:00 AM
aww what a cute festive tale Lin:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2024 5:44:00 AM
Thanks, Jan.

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