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bright green spears appear early april’s sweet prelude ~ nature unfolding delicate perfume still life of sunshine and rain ~ tiny ant’s palace Spring Flower, Bird or Butterfly Haiku x 2 Poetry Contest 2nd Place Tania Kitchin 2/15/23 Howmanysyllables #34

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Jim Slaughter

Date: 3/11/2023 9:58:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, SuZ, and congrats on its placement in the contest.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/12/2023 9:40:00 AM

Thanks Jim: With my hubby not well, my Muse is only willing to give back on short forms. Someday I will get back to writing some more in depth poems….I hope. Best, SuZ

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/8/2023 12:10:00 PM

lovely haiku on the first flower of spring - at least one of the first. Round our part of S. Indiana, we are enjoying their beauty daily and they crop up in some unusual unexpected places on their own. Neat pic to support your message.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2023 4:30:00 PM

Nature is wonderful, Reason and all we have to do is notice it and be thankful. Have a wonderful, “rest of the week.’ SuZ

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2023 3:12:00 AM

I have read your winning entry and enjoyed it. I like the closing line..Thanks for sharing. Congratulations. Sara

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2023 4:29:00 PM

Many Thanks, Sara for your Congratulatiions. and nice comment, Best, SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2023 10:17:00 AM

This is so cute. Congrats, Suz.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2023 4:28:00 PM

I appreciate you taking time to read and comment, HugZ SuZ

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/25/2023 8:10:00 PM

A very beautiful haiku on daffodils. Congratulations!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2023 4:26:00 PM

My sincere thanks for your kind comment. SuZ

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/25/2023 7:35:00 PM

Daffodils are the prelude to spring, I always feel uplifted when I see them filling up lawns and meadows, this is a lovely tribute to them, and congratulations on the contest placement!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2023 4:25:00 PM

Thanks Michelle: I appreciate your lovely comment and apologies for my late reply, Happy Spring.SuZ

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/25/2023 6:00:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem's very pleasing images, and the picture is awesome, SuZ. Congratulations on your win. :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2023 4:23:00 PM

My sincere thanks, Evelyn. Happy spring. SuZ

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/25/2023 1:21:00 PM

Congratulations, Suzanne, on your winning achievement; your set of haiku is so lovely, and I really liked the way you depicted the spring metaphors

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2023 4:21:00 PM

My belated thanks Sotto but no less heartfelt. May the beauty of spring be yours to enjoy soon,

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2023 12:29:00 PM

- Yellow as sunshine ... my garden has many daffodils ... beautifully written, SuZ :) - Congratulations on a 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/25/2023 12:36:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne Lise: I was so happy to be inspired. My creativity has been running at a low ebb lately so this was a thrill. Hugs, SuZ

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/25/2023 10:10:00 AM

Just charming SuZ! Your imagery is so creatively unique. It really sets off the beauty of the daffodil! Love "ant palace!" Congratulations on your win! Blessings!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/25/2023 12:35:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sam: I love finding insects in unexpected places. Nature is amazing. Blessings, SuZ

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/25/2023 8:15:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. As a child we had a driveway lined on both sides with this flower. It was a great way to be welcomed home each time we went out. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away.........................

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/25/2023 12:33:00 PM

Thanks for sharing your childhood memory of daffodils, Paula: I lived in the tropics most of my life so when we moved to a more temperate climate we really enjoyed our first experiences of spring and all the gorgeous blooming plants. SuZ