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Crowned May Queen

Crowned May Queen As the music flows in my mind and soul in cheer I dance around on my toes in the sun kissed fragrant fields of wildflowers and tall emerald green grass yields With a breath of life that dwells the day is near For I’m favored to be the prettiest maiden here All eyes will be on me in my white lace dress and closed shoes I will astound with my hair in curls and a crown of blossoms and leaves of green when I'm honored with the crown of May Queen a symbol of the stillness of nature surrounds In which everything revolves around Early bright is here with a clear blue unclouded sky My friends and neighbors are all excited to their utmost ability Townships and villages celebrating springtime fertility Handsome couples gathering bouquets of flowers from nearby decorating the whole town with springtime greenery and mystify I lead the celebration up to the heart of town singing Old buildings and tables are adorned with scented blooms that leave you breathless Populace displays all the elegance of their dress Dressed in white, carrying garlands of flowers and beaming children follow giggling and dancing They place a crown of blossoms on my head, I say a speech from my soul and set off the festivities, with dance and overwhelming merriment Musicians play their musical instruments with talent with eating, drinking, jubilant music, and courtly lovers dancing around the Maypole A feast fit for a King, everyone enjoys crafts, games, and carousel to console With a breath of life at the age of sixteen As the music flows in my mind and soul I dance around the maypole Favored for being the prettiest maiden seen Honored with being crowned May Queen
By: Eve Roper 4/18/2015 Quintella Form Children Story
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 5/8/2015 2:41:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your awesome poem taking First Place! Outstanding form with so much imagery portrayed! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/8/2015 6:14:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra, congratulations on your wonderful win too. May your weekend be blessed with lots of love and roses Happy Mother’s Day: ~) blessings Eve
Date: 5/8/2015 2:35:00 PM
Eve, CONGRATS in Isaiah Zerbst's contest *SKAT*
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Date: 5/8/2015 6:15:00 PM
Thank you, Skat, for the wonderful support. May your weekend be blessed with lots of love and roses Happy Mother’s Day: ~) blessings Eve
Date: 5/8/2015 2:25:00 PM
Eve. Congratulations on your first day of may win. Love LINDA
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/8/2015 6:17:00 PM
Thank you and may your weekend be blessed with lots of love and roses" Happy Mother’s Day" : ~) blessings dear friend Eve
Date: 4/20/2015 1:51:00 PM
wow, a great imagination used to concoct this flowery poem, Eve! I don't believe I ever wrote in this form before, and I am sure you did it splendidly. Sure to be a hit with the judge. You did just as he asked!
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Date: 4/20/2015 2:49:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, for the compliment and the inspiration, I hope it does . Blessings dear friend Eve
Date: 4/20/2015 9:15:00 AM
This is wonderful piece and I want it to be a memory. It must certainly place high in the contest. Best of luck!
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/20/2015 9:43:00 AM
Thank you so much for your inspiring compliment, Thvia.Blessings dear friend Eve
Date: 4/19/2015 7:25:00 PM
Oh SO charming! Light & Love
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Date: 4/20/2015 8:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Debbie. I so much appreciate your visits and support. Blessings Eve
Date: 4/19/2015 3:50:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Winning material dances. Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara
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Date: 4/20/2015 8:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara, for the support and compliment. Blessings Eve
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