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Come, walk in the spring's budding forest with me, Enraptured by musical sounds of the wild, Where life dwells unhindered and gracefully free. For children of nature, we happen to be, Made open and free as an innocent child… Come, walk in the spring's budding forest with me, Enthralled with the wonder of earth’s majesty, Abandoned with nature where God’s love has smiled, Where life dwells unhindered and gracefully free. Our worldly, dark troubles will magically flee, Erasing the sorrowful memories filed… Come, walk in the spring's budding forest with me, Tranquility flows everywhere peacefully With nature's deep fragrance, sweet-scented and mild, Where life dwells unhindered and gracefully free. Absorbing the essence of Earth's modesty, With stillness and beauty of nature compiled, Come, walk in the spring's budding forest with me, Where life dwells unhindered and gracefully free. March 13, 2015 ~8th Place~ Premiere Contest: 2019 Marathon Mile #24 Sponsor: Mark Toney Judged: 03/15/2019 ~6th Place~ Contest: Villanelle's and Terzanelle's Only Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Judged: 06/23/2015

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Date: 3/16/2019 11:24:00 AM
Beautifully verse, Sandra, congratulations on your well deserved win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/16/2019 11:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve. I appreciated your supportive comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/15/2019 11:04:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Sandra! Lovely! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/16/2019 11:42:00 AM
Thank you very much, Janice, for your congrats and uplifting comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/15/2019 10:23:00 PM
Sandra, your Villanelle is a wonderful "walk through the beautiful forest." That's how I felt after I read it. "Absorbing the essence of Earth's modesty..." - what a thought-provoking phrase! A Fav for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 24 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Only 3 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/16/2019 11:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mark, for my placement in this contest and for your uplifting comments and fav! I am happy that it met your expectations to be on your winner's list. Sandra :)
Date: 3/15/2019 9:54:00 PM
I adore Villanelle, and you have done it to perfection here, Sandra ... you NEVER disappoint, my good friend, on a level all your own. Congrats on your win! :-) <3
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/16/2019 11:40:00 AM
Thank you very much, Greg, for your congrats and very supportive and uplifting comments, which are so much appreciated coming from you, as I am always honored to receive them. Sandra <3 ;)
Date: 4/27/2016 11:21:00 PM
Nice to see this on a winning list again, Sandra, Congratulations on your "Second Chance #2 WIN." Love LINDA
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Date: 6/24/2015 9:08:00 PM
Such lovely flow of thoughts to words and lines and verses forms a great poem and invite. Congrats on your win, Sandra!
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:35:00 AM
Beautiful, congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/24/2015 1:37:00 AM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 6/24/2015 12:55:00 AM
nice win. PD
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Date: 6/23/2015 9:21:00 PM
very beautiful. Congrats for your win, sandra
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Date: 6/23/2015 9:12:00 PM
Clean, fresh, lovely write. Congratulations, Sandra. Viv x
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Date: 6/23/2015 12:42:00 PM
so lovely Sandra you carry your reader there congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 3/14/2015 12:14:00 PM
Hi Diane, I am such a fan! This is one of my favorites thus far. A seven from me!! This shall surely win a prize. Wishing you best luck in the contest! Hugs, Kimberly xx
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Kim Shaw
Date: 3/21/2015 12:35:00 PM
Hi Sandra! I see that I did a name jumble again. So sorry. I had just finished commenting to Diane. My apologies. This poem is def on my favorites list! Have a lovely day. Hugs, Kimberly
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/21/2015 11:06:00 AM
Hi Kimberly, I really appreciate your positive encouragement and support. thanks you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/14/2015 4:28:00 AM
A beautiful villanelle, Sandra...I enjoyed the tranquil walk through the forest...best wishes and hugs, Rhonda
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/14/2015 2:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rhonda. I always appreciate your supporting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/13/2015 4:47:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Sandra! It's light, whispy and refreshing! A joy to read! Love, Kim
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/14/2015 3:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. I really appreciate your encouraging words about my poem. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/13/2015 4:14:00 PM
I love this Villanelle, Sandra; one of my favourite forms. Thank you for taking me for a delightful walk through this enchanting forest where nature beckons with all its beauty. gl in the contest. // paul
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/14/2015 3:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paul. I am so pleased that you like it, and so much appreciate your support and nice comments. Sandra

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