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Clean Air

We’ve got to pause and ask ourselves: How much clean air do we need? Lee Iacocca Clean Air exhausting every breath, I climb every green tree, sigh. should i have to pay a great price to find pure air of paradise? lingering under canopy - a water bucket balcony. breezy rainforest’s rather nice to find the pure air of paradise. cut car engines, open the door, with tire-less legs instead of four, for it’s sweet time we sacrifice, to find the pure air of paradise. do we expend much, in protest, of the oxygen, we are blest? you might ask, “how much should suffice?” …to find the pure air of paradise! don’t waste, nor hold, nor hush nor scold. let your encouragement be bold. clean, verdant, breathtaking, precise - to find the pure air of paradise.

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Date: 5/4/2024 5:37:00 PM
This wonderful poetry emphasizes the significance of actively working to preserve the environment and lessen pollution to maintain clean and pure air, which is represented as paradise. Well done on your top-tier win dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2024 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, dear Lasaad!
Date: 4/28/2024 10:26:00 AM
i feel some pain, pur air is a necessity, but people don't care, precious words dear poet
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2024 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, Yann!
Date: 4/27/2024 10:37:00 PM
Clean, crisp air is a gift. This is a magnificent poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2024 5:29:00 AM
Thank you, Hilda!
Date: 4/27/2024 9:23:00 PM
Other than the long-ago-interred Lee I A-Cuckoo, who is against pure air?! ... Well, there's the Communist Chinese, who will start up five huge new coal-fired plants this year alone. Sigh. So much for CO2 emissions making a difference globally. BUT, at least you and I can enjoy clear, pure air locally (with a bit of effort). :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2024 5:29:00 AM
Breathe…yes, breathe!
Date: 4/27/2024 6:57:00 PM
A breath of fresh air is something we have to treasure, Very nicely penned
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2024 5:29:00 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 4/27/2024 1:27:00 PM
your poem creatively underscores our need for a planet with clean air. I believe we take our blessed air for granted as well as our planet. A profound write and great contest entry. Have a splendid weekend, hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2024 1:29:00 PM
Enjoy your weekend and thank you, Sara!
Date: 4/27/2024 1:00:00 PM
I read statistics on this. China is the major culprit in all this but U.S comes in around 4 or 5th place. Good poem, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2024 1:28:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 4/27/2024 10:09:00 AM
I wish we had that pure air of paradise right here on earth but we don't. Praying one day we will take in a breath of angel air, and God will say, " Welcome " but I am not eager to go there just yet Kim, thanks for the creative entry, gl in the contest :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2024 1:28:00 PM
Thank you, Rose! We go where the muse goes.

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