Cedar Deep Deep Green

cedar deep deep green shaped by ocean's east breezes strength in suffering

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Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 9/20/2012 5:30:00 PM

Wow, love this expressive haiku. The ending is very thought-consuming and relates to life in all it's up and downs. Bravo! Very well done! Also, thank you kindly on your comments on my stuff! Hugs!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/20/2012 2:06:00 PM

the ocean an eternal source of poetry! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2012 9:35:00 PM

You are really getting good at these!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/19/2012 8:46:00 PM

Wow, you are getting real good with these Haiku Sara! I'm very impressed with the artwork you have painted with these illustrious descriptions you've given! I love the delightful passion at which you show within this poem! I thoroughly love the stupendous and fascinating write you have written here tonight! I really enjoyed the awesomeness that this poem created within its confines! Fabulous piece, Great Work!!