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Catfish I love is on a plate with tartar sauce, french fries, and slaw; but I despise the type that trolls online, those pervs who break the law and tell some trusting kid, “I’m twelve, like YOU! I live right by the park near you. Let’s meet there by the bridge. You’ll be back home before it’s dark. Don’t tell your mom! If she’s like mine, she’ll tell you NO. Let’s just sneak out.” She says, “I’ll go slip out the back. We’ll have a lot of fun—no doubt!” The sicko rushed right to the bridge. The “kid” he met was twenty-five, an undercover cop with cuffs and back-up. “Channel 14 LIVE” rushed in on this newsworthy scene. A big catfish was caught that day. Because such wickedness abounds, not all such stories end this way. May 15, 2018, entered in Catie Lindsey's Catfish Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/3/2018 5:31:00 PM
You portrayed the meanings of catfish so so well Janice, this poem should be read by adults and children alike, the more who are aware of these vile trolls the safer people will be:-)Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/3/2018 9:17:00 PM
Thank you SO MUCH, Jan! Janice
Date: 6/2/2018 8:58:00 AM
Back for a congratulations Janice:) Superb job!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/2/2018 9:32:00 AM
Thanks so much, Danny! You are an encourager. Janice
Date: 6/2/2018 1:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/2/2018 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan! Janice
Date: 6/1/2018 9:53:00 PM
I love it. Well penned, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/1/2018 10:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 6/1/2018 8:09:00 PM
Janice, I enjoyed reading this enjoyable story...Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/1/2018 8:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! Janice
Date: 6/1/2018 9:35:00 AM
The seedy side of "catfish trolling." Nice work! Congratulations on the contest! -Cary
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/1/2018 9:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Cary! Janice
Date: 5/21/2018 6:14:00 PM
sadly, adults and kids are seraching for something hard to define. We risk so much for "firndship," and when we taste betrayal - often worse - the collective darkness of these times weighs on us all. Thanks for sharing (& making some turn to serious prayer/interceding).amen
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/21/2018 6:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anil! Janice
Date: 5/17/2018 5:22:00 PM
OH Janice you did a perfect job with this challenge , covering both meanings of the word. GREAT job.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/17/2018 5:38:00 PM
Thank you SO MUCH for this comment, Andrea!! Janice
Date: 5/15/2018 9:22:00 PM
Janice, just hearing the word catfish makes my mouth water. YUMMM. As far as the other kind, all i can say is I am glad my children are grown. There are also predators for adults especially senior citizens. What a sick world! Tough subject but tastefully written. Good luck:)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/15/2018 9:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel! It was a very different world for kids--for everybody--fifty years ago. Janice
Date: 5/15/2018 2:09:00 PM
Kids don't know what they are dealing with online. I'm glad the police are monitoring at some level. Kudos for tackling this subject Janice. Best for a win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/15/2018 3:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Earth was like a different planet fifty years ago! Janice
Date: 5/15/2018 1:48:00 PM
I've only ever heard the term catfish for a fish not a sicko internet troll - trolls like this need to baited and caught and end up in court:-) hugs jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/15/2018 3:15:00 PM
More and more of them ARE getting caught, but there are apparently so MANY of them out there. Add to that the freedom some youngsters have!! Thanks for your comment, Jan! Janice

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