Caprice

CAPRICE The day Starting slowly A faint trill In the woodwinds And the sun Oh the sun! Tints Those rose colored clouds So still Small and Shaped Yawning Still sleep drugged Then A breeze From somewhere On my cheek and In wonder In thought I rub my eyes The sentinels From on high Sing praise Unto the sky All is twiggy Woody Mid March And I Standing Atop an awakening Earth Dare I wish for But one last glimpse That this single moment Might never end

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/17/2010 10:50:00 PM

It is the beginning, Daver, spring is acoming. :) Nice write with great imagery. Thanks for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2010 12:52:00 PM

A moment in time. You captured its essence wonderfully, DAver. I really enjoyed this one and the imagery you used. LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2010 5:32:00 PM

Great Spring write...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/14/2010 2:48:00 PM

Daver. . . .this is Peace! Only one who knows it can really write of it. Love, Connie

Skat A

Date: 3/13/2010 10:00:00 PM

#7..I enjoyed this poem..I figure sometimes we all think about the the momment in our lives, are the ones that r not gonna end ..So don't think beautiful moments will end. I ran across your name in my favorite soup person, favorite poet . U where on her list. I am glad 2 know me and Andrea, share the same favorites..u r awesome. Daver...

Sheila Parrish-Spence

Date: 3/13/2010 12:18:00 PM

This is the kind of poem that makes the reader sit and think. The images are so real. Thank you for rejoying my poem about the violin.

Susan Palli

Date: 3/13/2010 12:13:00 PM

Beautiful words.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/13/2010 10:51:00 AM

Daver, I feel drugged into being mesmerized just reading this piece by your pen. Well done as usual, my friend. Into my favs.Thanks you -Robert

Date: 3/13/2010 10:06:00 AM

Wow! I could just feel this one. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/13/2010 10:06:00 AM

A magnificent ode to Earth awakening in Mid March, Daver. This is a moment you should capture and hold for a lifetime, so please allow yourself to take one last look! Joyful poem that brought a smile to my face, dear friend. Love, Carolyn