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12/1/2024 for haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by Rick Parise

butterfly essence enigmatic and foreign we both love the sun

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/11/2024 11:31:00 AM

delightful ~

David Crandall
Date: 12/11/2024 3:01:00 PM

Thanks Line!

Karen Jones

Date: 12/2/2024 3:36:00 AM

Great poem David as I love butterflies!

David Crandall
Date: 12/2/2024 4:04:00 PM

Thanks Karen! I'm lucky to have a lot of monarchs by my house. They like the milkweeds.

Maria Williams

Date: 12/1/2024 10:48:00 PM

Nice haiku David - you said all in just the three lines - Hugs Maria

David Crandall
Date: 12/2/2024 4:03:00 PM

Thanks Maria!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/1/2024 9:28:00 PM

Awn this is so beautiful, such a wonderful haiku that flows seamlessly and depicts your love for the sun! Butterflies and you. Brilliant! Pleasure reading this. Best wishes for the contest

David Crandall
Date: 12/2/2024 4:02:00 PM

Thanks Ink! I appreciate your comments!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2024 7:54:00 PM

I too love the sun. We are both butterflies!

David Crandall
Date: 12/2/2024 4:00:00 PM

Yes, sunshine! :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/1/2024 4:51:00 PM

sweet poem David:-) hugs Jan xx

David Crandall
Date: 12/2/2024 4:00:00 PM

Thanks Jan :-)