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Bundle of Joys

Her smile shattered by the sadistic. Eve became a statistic. The serpent tied the sling. Claustrophobic catastrophe - frail wing. Her bundle of joys blown to smithereens, her angel boys.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/23/2025 3:21:00 AM

It is said that Eve die well after Adam. Maybe she repented her misdeed. Lovely poem.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2025 4:03:00 AM

Thank you, Victor

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 2/23/2025 2:41:00 AM

The imagery is excellent Kim. You show tragedy in this poem very well.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2025 4:02:00 AM

Thank you, Oliver

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/22/2025 10:45:00 PM

The word sadistic puts this poem in a very dire genre. It may be concerning the two babies who were murdered by Hamas. Everyone is eternally horrified by it. This isn't a beautiful poem, but it is one that should be read. Thank you for your concern.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2025 4:01:00 AM

Thank you, Hilda…

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/22/2025 4:36:00 AM

really excellent sijo, you manage to bring something different and unique to everything you write

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2025 5:54:00 PM

Thank you, Charlotte! I appreciate you <3

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/22/2025 2:12:00 AM

intense and subtle, images are beautiful

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2025 5:55:00 PM

Thank you, Yann!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 2/21/2025 10:56:00 PM

Profound loss expressed using accurate symbols and tones.Very nice.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2025 5:55:00 PM

Thank you, Akham!

Marinus Jansen

Date: 2/21/2025 4:35:00 PM

Touching means arousing deep or intense feelings or emotions. This poem did.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2025 6:34:00 PM

Thank you, Marinus.

Paige Hind

Date: 2/21/2025 4:22:00 PM

Ugh, so raw - hurts to read it. If you're writing about what the comments said, about Gaza and all, it's time that someone did. Children are so beautiful, it's terrible that people would intentionally do them harm.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2025 6:35:00 PM

So awful…