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Bridegroom of the Sky

Like a bridegroom crowned in crimson, He rises out of his chamber, Scarlet circlets round his person, Bedecked in tangerine amber; With tears of joy* shed on the grass, The world rejoices when he comes, His smile's reflected on the glass Of each river, as daylife* thrums; An incarnadine cirque, he glows From one end of heaven's doorway, In merry-go-round, he follows His circuit till the end of day; The birds belt out ballads divine When he stirs them with soft caress; But, he's barely a ball of shine Before the Sun of Righteousness*. -------------18.11.16------------- ( *Tears of joy - dew; *Daylife - opposite of nightlife *Sun of Righteousness - Lord Jesus Christ )

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Date: 12/22/2016 12:06:00 PM
Congrats Jo to win top place on your nice piece. Best wishes.
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Date: 12/22/2016 10:15:00 AM
Your choice of the five choices is excellent in my book..I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..Congrats on your placement..Sara
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Date: 12/23/2016 1:15:00 AM
Thank you, Sara:) I'm much encouraged by the top spot awarded:) the challenge was tough, but once I got the inspiration from Psalms 19, it became easier:) all glory be to God:)
Date: 12/19/2016 12:01:00 PM
Well done Jo, congratulations...
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Date: 12/19/2016 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved first place! How beautifully you venerate divine love Jo. This poem is exquisite and a fave for me! 7 ; ) Have a blessed holiday my friend.
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Date: 12/18/2016 10:10:00 PM
There is no sun greater than the Son. I am here to testify to your feelings and faith. Great write. Congrats on 1st place.
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Date: 12/17/2016 8:58:00 PM
I see why Sara chose this one. You both are so much alike in the way you proclaim your love of the Lord, Jo. Great imagery and congrats for top spot.
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Date: 12/17/2016 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations...this poem is indeed a winner.
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Date: 12/7/2016 11:32:00 AM
Shinning like a bright sun, is this poem. Simply fabulous! A 7 & I am going to put it in my fav list.
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Date: 11/18/2016 11:34:00 PM
Lovely and great ...
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