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Though fully dressed for a wedding I could not resist the buffet, Fine lipstick wore off for a refill Of dessert from a laden tray. Soon, full tummy began to roll Up, down like the hall’s throbbing light My rear needed to drop a bomb; Restraining the urge,’ not tonight!’ As bridesmaid, I pulled the doves’ cage While they zoomed off, my eyes sensed it Before rushing to the girl’s loo, My gown streaked with birds’ deposit! Everyone Poops Contest of Roy Jerden 7/30/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/24/2015 11:49:00 AM
Nette, Congrats on your win. Another interesting contest. LOVE SKAT
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Date: 9/22/2015 4:35:00 AM
Hilarious!! And where did you find that picture? Just the other day, my car got splattered by what must have been a buzzard or a VERY large owl because it covered half my windshield...Congrats my friend! - Tim
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Date: 9/22/2015 3:03:00 AM
They do tend to let us have it, don't they. Great write.
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Date: 9/22/2015 1:59:00 AM
Elegant, Nette, with a vivid mental image. Congrats, Viv
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Date: 9/22/2015 12:26:00 AM
Congrats on ur very witty winning write nette!
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Date: 8/1/2015 2:57:00 PM
Dignified humour, I would say, Nette!! Bet most of this was caught on camera:) hugs // paul
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Date: 8/1/2015 1:05:00 AM
Nette with that grace and humor!!wow!!~ 17 or 18? See ya~Olive Eloisa hugs!!
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Date: 7/30/2015 6:59:00 PM
Hahaha....Nette, this is a priceless write for the contest. Well done! Hugs
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Date: 7/30/2015 5:44:00 PM
A wonderful write Nette. It so lovely, good luck in the contest.............A.M.
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Date: 7/30/2015 3:41:00 PM
oh my, a double whammy on that wedding day. Can you imagine being in a gown too difficult to get out of? Cute title on this one too!
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Date: 7/30/2015 2:51:00 PM
Hahaha! The doves won the poop game and the laughs are on you. Rollickin' poem like a comical scene!
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Date: 7/30/2015 1:55:00 PM
Oh my, I'm sure we've all been there ...good luck Tim
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Date: 7/30/2015 10:59:00 AM
Top of the heap, fun poem. Laughing hard at the rumbling tummy and the doves. ' Drop the bomb' was a BOMB!
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Date: 7/30/2015 8:33:00 AM
This is a tough contest to write for, dear. you did it with finesse. Good luck! Hugs
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Date: 7/30/2015 5:34:00 AM
- Well done for this contest ...... accident we can laugh at in retrospect :) - Good luck in the contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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