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Blindsided

Lived a sly lady of Mozambique who seductivly offered a peek. Men paid her a buck but were out of luck. What they saw was totally oblique.

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/28/2020 11:12:00 PM

G'day Paul ... promises can certainly loosen the purse strings Paul, and when the penny drops it's too late - thank you Paul - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 7/29/2020 1:42:00 PM

It pains me to say it, Lindsay, but a whole lot of men are gullible, naive, and stupid (I think I qualify for the first two). Thank you for being so faithful in commenting; it means a lot to me. Hugs, Paul

Jan Allison

Date: 7/28/2020 3:18:00 PM

ha ha ha fabulous word play - my witty muse has upped and left not done a limerick in a while but did post a silly poem yesterday so i am hoping my muse will start to behave, hope you and your loved ones are keeping well, our island is 68 days covid free - we are truly blessed:-) hugs jan x

Paul Schneiter
Date: 7/28/2020 6:35:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. I cherish words from you, whatever the venue. I thoroughly enjoyed your spring poem. Your muse was obviously operating at full force. We are well (thanks for the wishes), and I'm delighted your islamd has been virus free for 68 blessed days. Hugs, Paul