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Bite Sized Poem - Pre Digested Flies

Maker of silken web sits & waits as planned Compound eyes see but don't understand Destiny ensures trapped & entangled fly Struggle is short, venom ensures end is nigh Delicately wrapped, pre-digestion takes place Daily drama that unfolds in this lair of lace

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2023 8:34:00 PM

Very nicely described. Congrats

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/1/2023 10:57:00 PM

Thank you - an attempt to try something different haha

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/15/2023 8:18:00 AM

You really are on a roll D. This is terrific too. Only you could mix pre-digested flies with a lair of lace, and make a truly good poem out of it. I love it

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/15/2023 8:23:00 AM

I spot the issues no one is talking about :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/14/2023 5:11:00 PM

beautiful penning i can feel the mystery and "anxiety", thanks a lot

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/14/2023 10:51:00 PM

Thank you Yann, my tune changed - but only slightly :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/14/2023 3:51:00 PM

oh dilly I love it !! especially the final line and the lair of lace - awesome imagery! hugs ja xx

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/14/2023 10:51:00 PM

Thanks Jan! With it being called bite sized it can prompt me in funny directions sometimes and it is spider season now x