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Birds

rendezvous in sun 
                                  hummingbird's plight on ocean
                                              solo odyssey



                                              June 25, 2022
                         Nature-themed Summer Haiku Poetry Contest
                                        Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
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                                               FIRST PLACE 

                              Brian Strand's Premier Haiku Contest

Notes: The ruby-throated hummingbird is a species of hummingbird that generally spends the winter in Central America, Mexico, and Florida, and migrates to Canada and other parts of Eastern North America for the summer to breed. It is by far the most common hummingbird seen east of the Mississippi River in North America. 
During migration, some birds embark on a nonstop 900-mile journey across the Gulf of Mexico and Caribbean from Panama or Mexico to the eastern United States.
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Date: 7/26/2022 10:09:00 AM
A lovely Haiku write/picture. I love hummingbirds. I wish you would write more. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away...............
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Date: 7/5/2022 12:13:00 PM
Way to go. Congrats on this winner. Just love those hummers. Sara
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Date: 7/5/2022 6:42:00 AM
Wow! Very lovely. Congratulations on your first win my dear friend! Thanks for sharing. Hugs
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/5/2022 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, Len. Really appreciate your visit and inspiring comment.
Date: 7/4/2022 4:31:00 PM
Back with Congrats for your top win
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/4/2022 4:50:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Appreciate.
Date: 7/4/2022 7:26:00 AM
Mala, congratulations on your first place win with your gorgeous haiku, a fav for me!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/4/2022 7:47:00 AM
Ohhhh…Tania…a fave for you! Feeling honoured! Love and BW ~ Mala
Date: 7/4/2022 5:12:00 AM
Beautifully penned Mala! Linda
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/4/2022 7:48:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. Really appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 7/3/2022 11:05:00 PM
Congratulations Mala on your first place win !
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Valsa George
Date: 7/4/2022 8:32:00 AM
Feel humbled and overjoyed dear sweet friend ! Please know that this admiration is mutual. I admire the great poet, artist, singer and translator in you....! Stay blessed..
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/4/2022 5:04:00 AM
Dear Valsa, Truly appreciate your kind support. Today morning opened my eyes, and saw your comment - I just felt so blessed! I often read your poems to feel inspired - your inner deep thoughts, imageries, intricate poetic forms, choice of words and phrases, and finally the underlying emotions - all are exceptionally brilliant - a gifted poet! Continue creating wonderful poems - your support and your presence at this site are our blessings! Love and best wishes ~ Mala
Date: 7/3/2022 4:44:00 AM
Beautiful pic and lovely poem.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/4/2022 4:56:00 AM
Thanks, Karen. I am attached to this bird for many reasons - even the name itself is so attractive!
Date: 7/2/2022 10:51:00 AM
I love to see the Hummingbirds here. Beautiful poem. I enjoyed :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/2/2022 11:50:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi. Those birds are charming, aren’t they? Love ~ Mala
Date: 6/27/2022 1:35:00 AM
Excellent haiku, Mala.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/2/2022 11:49:00 AM
Thanks, Harry. So appreciate your dropping by…and leaving a kind comment. Best ~ Mala
Date: 6/26/2022 1:51:00 PM
very pretty. Love it.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/26/2022 3:14:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Your lovely comment is appreciated.
Date: 6/26/2022 6:37:00 AM
Beautiful photo, Mala--and equally beautiful poem with splendid imagery. Best to you.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/26/2022 3:13:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. Such a lovely comment from a gifted poet!
Date: 6/26/2022 1:25:00 AM
Humming birds are amazing. After winter, with the beginning of summer they travel back miles and miles crossing oceans. The solo odyssey of the hummingbird astonishes us. Great haiku, Mala. Win big !
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/26/2022 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa. Your comments are really precious to me, Dear Friend.
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