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Beyond the Blue Sky

Beyond the blue sky There's a Heaven we believe sweet home is like too

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Richard Palmer

Date: 8/27/2012 11:11:00 AM

nice write BL,we believe,check out my views in my poem Heaven

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2012 8:14:00 PM

Very nice, BL! Sweet comparison to heaven.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/27/2012 1:16:00 AM

You are too. Thanks for sweet comment. Loved always, bl

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/26/2012 2:23:00 PM

step #1 Dev no need for capitalization in haiku [it's Ok for proper names though] Light & Love

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/27/2012 1:14:00 AM

Many thanks for your comment with suggestion. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2012 2:05:00 PM

Sounds nice out beyond the blue skies - well written - oxox hugs Anne-Lise ;)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/27/2012 1:13:00 AM

Lovely friend, Thank you for nice comment. Loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/26/2012 1:34:00 PM

Great thoughts penned...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/27/2012 1:12:00 AM

Thanks my sweet friend for early comment. Loved always, bl