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Virgin ears... catch the gentle scrape of nylon against nylon Virgin eyes... catch a flash of garter Right knee over left The simple motion of legs crossing She catches him looking She glances down then glances back up Pouting, sultry expression: tugging her lower lip she smiles…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/5/2015 1:57:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations :) On your wonderful Honorable Mention. ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/5/2015 9:07:00 AM
Perfectly written... Well done!
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Date: 9/4/2015 3:45:00 AM
Subtly beautiful Tim! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/26/2015 2:33:00 PM
Innocence soon lost? a come hither look in her eyes, is asking for trouble !!! Good one, Tim !!
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Date: 8/23/2015 6:48:00 PM
Now this one I GET. And I LIKE IT A LOT!!
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Date: 8/22/2015 2:31:00 PM
Hi Tim Love this piece... simple/sensual and "sultry" ~~x~~
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Date: 8/22/2015 12:58:00 PM
Tim, a great example of sensual without vulgarity, very nice A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, something not quite right, yes so many lost souls in the world . . .
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Constance La France
Date: 8/22/2015 1:03:00 PM
Oh Tim you are very perceptive, it is my brother, he was diagnosed at 14 years old and his life has been a struggle. At the moment he is taking his medicine but that could change in a flash . . .
Date: 8/17/2015 3:47:00 PM
oh wow, Tim...this is a sizzling sultry piece. Good luck in Justin's contest....can to name who that young innocent one ways? ;)
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Date: 8/17/2015 1:09:00 PM
ooh this is beautifully sensual - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
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