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Beach Footles Collaboration

Hot sun What fun Soft sand How grand Blue sea For me High tide Surf side Beach babe In shade Undress Top less No finds Tan lines Swim suit… pursuit He sports Tight shorts Romance? No chance Jan Allison Casarah Nance 1st December 2014

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Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 10/29/2017 2:54:00 PM

Very funny and charming!

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/18/2017 4:22:00 PM

very charming.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2017 4:25:00 PM

thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

John Michaels

Date: 3/20/2017 4:02:00 PM

That's great!! These Footles are a lot of fun.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2017 4:25:00 PM

Thanks John sorry I missed replying until now:-( hugs jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/27/2016 2:42:00 PM

Touche, Jan. Spot on collaboration. Now was Tim your better half? Just asking. Love this footle. Great job well done from the both of yous. Much love, RW.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2016 3:28:00 PM

Tim is tim Smith we joined soup around the same time also with casarah and Armand (Maurice yvonne) We used to have such fun writing collaboration poems together and called ourselves the four musky tears lol Hugs Jan xx

Richard Martins

Date: 10/1/2016 7:32:00 AM

Love it!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2016 7:25:00 PM

I love the footle form Richard just a few words can be very amusing:-) hugs Jan xx

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/14/2016 4:43:00 PM

Loved this wonderful collaboration.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2016 7:23:00 PM

thanks Lenny am so sorry I missed replying before:-) hugs Jan xx

Sean Kelly

Date: 12/20/2014 1:46:00 PM

Well Done : Have Fun ... High Tide : New Bride ... Sea Shore : Please More ! .. Well done you 2 , and keep on "footling" , it aint easy , but it;s fun ... Tks for your kind comments ..

Jan Allison
Date: 12/20/2014 1:52:00 PM

I love footling around Sean (don't tell my hubby lol) Hugs Jan xxx

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 12/9/2014 12:22:00 PM

Well done: Much fun. Good sun Can run Good art In Heart Each man Love Jan Love you

Jan Allison
Date: 12/9/2014 12:57:00 PM

Thanks so much Ovidiu:-) Hug Jan x

Darlene Gifford

Date: 12/2/2014 12:27:00 PM

Congrats, you, two! Great footles! A 7 for sure. I really enjoyed these and it's a save for me.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 12:28:00 PM

Thanks so much Darlene:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 12/2/2014 12:24:00 PM

Nice one girls, love this set of Footles :) xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 12:27:00 PM

Thanks so much James I do appreciate your support:-) Hugs jan xxx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/2/2014 7:59:00 AM

nicely done day at the beach ,smiles all around

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 10:29:00 AM

Thanks Robert:-) Hugs jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/2/2014 7:23:00 AM

love this Jan and casarah hugs 7

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 10:29:00 AM

Thanks so much Shadow:-) Hugs Jan x

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/2/2014 5:47:00 AM

Dreaming of summer before the winter starts? Well, when you write in such a grand way it is allowed. Pleasing to read. Left me with a smile " watching" beauties undress! Ha-ha! Wonderful dear, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 6:45:00 AM

We had fun writing these together Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/2/2014 4:18:00 AM

"Undress/ Top less" funny quark, only top? (but) Romance?/ No chance Very unfair Jan/Cas...fun and fun Love . God bless XXXXX rajat

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 6:44:00 AM

LOL Rajat - we could have continued the poem with other footles - better to leave the reader wanting more :-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/2/2014 2:28:00 AM

this is fun , cas and jan... I like all though 'swim suit.. pursuit' stands our for me! you go, girllls!.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 6:43:00 AM

Thanks Nette I was in need of some fun and Cas helped me smile again:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2014 10:46:00 PM

hahaha. who did the last two? They made the ending so good. These are wonderful , you guys. GREAT work.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 1:13:00 AM

We never tell who wrote which line - you should know my style by now ;-) - I needed fun in my life yesterday!!!! Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 12/1/2014 9:59:00 PM

Great footles...hey Jan....nice tan....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 1:11:00 AM

I'm the white one in the corner! Hugs Jan x

Joseph May

Date: 12/1/2014 8:11:00 PM

Very nice footles Jan...nicely penned...

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 1:11:00 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan x

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/1/2014 7:19:00 PM

Great collaboration. It looks and reads like lots of fun. 7

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 1:11:00 AM

Thanks Brenda - we had fun:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/1/2014 6:39:00 PM

I thought the best line was topless! When do the three of us meet and at what beach and just to be a good sport I will go topless too. A Fav!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 1:10:00 AM

LOL you go topless I don't ha ha ha:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/1/2014 5:51:00 PM

I read the other collab on Cas..and I read this from yours.Its grest to feel you better Jan x..Make me yearn for summer.Reminds me of the song-Girls just wanna have fun : ) Lovely!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/1/2014 5:52:00 PM

Thanks Charmaine have had a few massive knocks lately but i will get by! hugs jan x

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/1/2014 5:44:00 PM

That was fun :) Thank you for bringing me lots to smile about! Hugs xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/1/2014 5:47:00 PM

me too Cas - think we both needed our spirits lifting:-) Turned out great my friend:-) hugs Jan xx