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Barely escaped as a bear chased me down the hall my eyes wide open for the rest of the night Bearing my soul to the roar of laughter… seemed uproariously serious in the depths of R.E.M. 10/6/2021

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Date: 10/7/2021 11:14:00 AM
You and I were both on the idea of a bear trying to get us yesterday Kim! "Barely escaped as a bear chased me down the hall" Isn't that a "wavelength!"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2021 12:15:00 PM
An “on the edge wavelength”
Date: 10/6/2021 8:55:00 PM
It's nice that the fear fades away with the dream. You described it so well. Great writing! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2021 12:16:00 PM
Putting it in a poem, chases it away… thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 10/6/2021 8:03:00 PM
Whew! I 'barely' survived that first stanza! Pleasanter dreams, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2021 12:17:00 PM
LOL! Not typing with ghost fingers. Thank you! Oh no…gotta ru…
Date: 10/6/2021 2:00:00 PM
Dreams of being chased are so scary, but like the funny twist at the end~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2021 7:27:00 PM
LOL…thanks!
Date: 10/6/2021 1:22:00 PM
I hate those dreams that seem too real and leave me afraid and sleep elusive. I enjoyed reading your work. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2021 1:46:00 PM
Thank you, sweet one!
Date: 10/6/2021 12:22:00 PM
Hello Kim, Yes drink hot camomile, or lavender tea before bed time. ^hey both work. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/6/2021 2:49:00 PM
Hello Kim, it really works. I drink this tea when i can not find Lavender tea. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2021 1:45:00 PM
Yes, Ma’am! Thank you :)
Date: 10/6/2021 7:38:00 AM
Trouble sleeping? Take a hot camomile.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2021 7:40:00 AM
Doesn’t always work. But thanks xx
Date: 10/6/2021 7:09:00 AM
I have had vivid dreams like this before myself. It is amazing and frightening how real they can seem. Nicely done Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2021 7:40:00 AM
For sure! Thanks, Chris!
Date: 10/6/2021 7:02:00 AM
What a nightmare! I don't think I could've gone back to sleep. Realistic, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2021 7:41:00 AM
I don’t think I did! LOL

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