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Arctic Sunset - For Contest

arctic sunset numbed by frozen sea cold streaks ignite molten sky embers hiss in death John g. Lawless 11/16/2015 submitted to – Sunset – Poetry Contest sponsor – Nayda Ivette Negron

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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/26/2015 7:07:00 PM
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Fantastic imagery, JOhn! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/24/2015 10:10:00 AM
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Congrats for your win, John. And have a lovely Thanksgiving.
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Skat A
Date: 11/24/2015 4:26:00 AM
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John, CONGRATS! On your sweet SunSet win. LOVE SKAT
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/23/2015 8:57:00 PM
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Wonderful write! Congratulations on your win!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/23/2015 11:51:00 AM
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"molten sky" very lovely visual, John. Congrats.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2015 2:20:00 PM
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Thanks Lin, always appreciated your kind words.
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James Inman
Date: 11/23/2015 11:02:00 AM
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Very nice , John. Strong powerful imagery.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2015 2:20:00 PM
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Thanks James
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/23/2015 10:25:00 AM
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Love the onomatopeia! CongratsJohn!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2015 2:20:00 PM
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Damn, that's a long, bouncy, hill filled, juggernaut of a word. thanks for stopping by to comment Balveen.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/23/2015 10:18:00 AM
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Nice visual stirred through your words, John. Congrats on your fine win. Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2015 2:18:00 PM
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Thanks Sandra, I have a very visual mind....the challenge being to draw the picture with words. appreciate the comment.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/23/2015 9:44:00 AM
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Congratulations John.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2015 2:16:00 PM
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thanks Nayda.
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/18/2015 3:49:00 PM
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Lovely imagery, John; can imagine the burning sun hissing as it slides into the sea! gl in the contest. // paul
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John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2015 2:15:00 PM
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thanks Paul, always nice to hear from you, appreciate the comment.

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