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Anodyne Premiere Contest Winner

Please tell me there's a healing anodyne, some kind of mythical enlightenment, a cure capable of extinguishing the flames of grief burning deep within my heart. It's a fire I cannot douse or smother. If there is a balm, something known to man, I beseech you, bathe me in its pacifying waters before my heartache drives me insane. Cleanse the malignancy lost love has wrought. In the song of a lark I found a brief respite. His voice soothed the beast blazing in my breast but then off he flew before I slept. My ache found but a moment's relief then returned to plague me, smoldering again. I linger in sorrow, without means of escape from a life of recurring fear and doubt. Is there no utopian Shangri La or illusive Camelot where memories of us will not haunt me? If not, I must endure this anguish to my grave. In desperation, I planted a garden of herbs and nibbled leaves of chamomile and yarrow, but no analgesic did they prove to be. I should've sown hemlock to end my misery. What anodyne will succor the look of disdain I see, when in a mirror I sorrowfully visualize the love his eyes once held for me? If the antidote blinds me, I beg to be dosed. I would sacrifice sight to set my heart free. June 18, 2022 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 3 Sponsored by Mark Toney

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Date: 7/8/2022 9:22:00 AM
I add another wow to Beata's. How wonderful to see this one adorned with a trophy win. Belated congrats to you, jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/8/2022 1:01:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Looking at past marathon winners? I've decided to leave the race.
Date: 6/22/2022 1:09:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me delight virtually and poetically over your "ANODYNE" expose. God bless you.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/8/2022 1:00:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Beata. I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 6/21/2022 7:49:00 AM
I’m fortunate to have come across this outstanding work. Hope the account is fictional though ~ on going through the comments, I see it is. Congrats on your top win, Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/21/2022 8:38:00 AM
I think we've all had a heartbreak. I have, but this one is not about my misfortune. Thank you very much for your comments, Seeker.
Date: 6/20/2022 9:10:00 PM
Dear Jenna, such exquisite sorrow overflows with aching grace from your gifted pen. The depth and breadth of this expression of heartbreak is profound. Lost love is so sadly beautiful in this masterwork. Congratulations for your truly excellent trophy win in Mark’s contest. The intensity, fullness and richness of your talent is revealed. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/21/2022 8:37:00 AM
Thank you for offering your kind thoughts, as you always do, Susan. I was fortunate to have written this using one of Edward's themes and it's been rewarded twice. I always appreciate your visits.
Date: 6/20/2022 10:49:00 AM
OMG, Jenna, your excellent word choice expounds on the torture being experienced as the result of lost love. This unrelenting agony is the exception to Alfred Lord Tennyson's well-known quote. Choosing "Anodyne" for the title is brilliant. Congratulations on your first-place finish on Mile 3 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/20/2022 11:08:00 AM
I am very pleased to have this one honored in Mile 3. I must give credit for the title to Edward Ibeh because it was a theme in his contest two years ago. Thank you ever so much for a placement in your Marathon, Mark. Tis not always better to have loved and lost...such is my way of thinking.
Date: 6/20/2022 10:48:00 AM
Ah! I remember this masterpiece---it deservedly won 1st place---you wrote for my contest. Glad to see it win 1st place again, Jenna:-) I tried to fave it and it dawned me I've already done so!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/20/2022 11:05:00 AM
The credit for this one goes to you for your contest theme from August of 2020, Edward. I'll tuck your 2nd fave inside my mind to remember. Thanks ever so much for the inspiration.
Date: 6/20/2022 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. An amazing write. Have a blessed day/week writing away....................
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/20/2022 11:03:00 AM
Thanks so much for the kudos, Paula.
Date: 6/20/2022 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win... Stay blessed
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/20/2022 11:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Paghunda.
Date: 8/5/2020 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations for your great win Jenna :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/5/2020 11:47:00 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi.
Date: 8/5/2020 9:47:00 AM
Hi Jenna, back with congrats on your first place for this deep emotional piece. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/5/2020 11:47:00 AM
Hi John. Welcome back and thank you so much for a revisit.
Date: 8/4/2020 4:06:00 PM
A poem written from the heart Jenna, I think there are many who can relate to such heartbreak, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/5/2020 6:36:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful comments, Jan. I'm always happy to see your kindness through your words.
Date: 8/4/2020 3:03:00 PM
I'm rendered speechless. Lots of yeses, perhaps! Your poem resonates your desperation to the reader. You've pulled the topic out, and put it together here magnificently. Congratulations on choosing the more abstract and less popular title option. I think the comp was stiff, this is a rightful winner.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/5/2020 6:35:00 AM
I'm delighted with your comments, Sigrid. I chose this title because it was unique. Edward gives poets a wide range of themes for his contests, and I'm enjoying them. Thanks so much for honoring my write with your thoughts.
Date: 8/4/2020 12:19:00 PM
Your muse is a heartfelt one Jenna. The anguish and restlessness flow brilliantly through your words. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/5/2020 6:33:00 AM
Thank you for the kind congratulatory words, Aditi.
Date: 8/4/2020 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on winning 1st place in my contest with this spectacular poem, Jenna:-) It's a FAV for me!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/5/2020 6:33:00 AM
Edward, It's an honor to write for you. Your contests are both interesting and challenging. Thank you so very much.
Date: 8/1/2020 1:17:00 PM
What a plaintiff cry, so well described Jenna, I think I've got a new fave poet, I enjoy everything you write!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 2:30:00 PM
I would be honored to be on your list of favored poets, John. I didn't know you'd read more than a couple of my poems, but it pleases me to know you have. Thanks so very much.
Date: 8/1/2020 9:01:00 AM
Wow...a big write...Well expressed too...Enjoyed this one. All the best
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 10:30:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo. I'll leave it as is. Hugs :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 8/1/2020 9:55:00 AM
No, it's the YOU in each stanza that makes the lamentation heart wrenching...very appealing...no need for change here...it's a good write
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 9:34:00 AM
Do you think it's too long to hold anyone's interest? I welcome your thoughts and thank you for reading this one, Arturo.
Date: 8/1/2020 7:11:00 AM
The pain and anguish of lost love captured so well in your verse Jenna. I hope it's a fictional write. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 9:00:00 AM
All is well with me, Tom. It's fictional, but based on memories. My heart would have to heal on its own before I'd sacrifice my vision. Thanks for your kind thoughts.
Date: 8/1/2020 7:02:00 AM
I can feel the deep emotional pain in your words, Jenna. Perhaps poetry will be your anodyne and give your soul peace. Hugs, John
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/1/2020 9:06:00 AM
You are right, the scars never go away; mine still show after 40 years.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 8:58:00 AM
The pain has mostly faded, but I think the scars will always be a reminder. Poetry has always been a healer for me. Thank you for caring, John.
Date: 8/1/2020 6:14:00 AM
Very dark, I like it. I can feel your pain and I'm sorry for your heartbreak. Great poem Jenna! Good luck in the contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 8:57:00 AM
Hi Mark. Thanks for the sympathy you offer. Fortunately, I moved past the heartbreak.

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