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An Angel

Reveling in her mystery An unknown aura touches The shoulder of her guardian soul Protecting it, eternally on her watch. ******* She inhales in perfect beauty Embracing the images mind In majestic grace, she held captive With isolated thoughts, the sands of time. ******* The spirit moved in quick response To what lay, in that moment of time She reached inside the physical realm Righting that moment to unwind. ******* She held the few granules of time Knowing a life was saved today The angel held out her hand Knowing divine love, saved the day. *******
28/03/12 Phyllis Babcock

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/22/2012 9:08:00 AM
divine love always saves the day its like superman only better excellent poem
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Date: 4/5/2012 3:39:00 PM
A great reminder that our guardian angel is always with us to whisper words of wisdom when needed. If only we would keep our ear turned to hear it. Great job here Phyl. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/31/2012 6:12:00 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Yes, this morn I did have my coffee at the computer trying to read and comment on a few..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/31/2012 12:23:00 PM
A highly creative rhyme form and I like the way you separated the stanzas with the stars. The description of how this angel is always watching out for us bring me comfort. Beautiful work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/30/2012 8:30:00 PM
I sure hope each one of us has one of these. Good description of her, Phyllis. Hope you do well in the contest. I have not even thought about this one and probably won't do it. Do YOU have an angel, my friend?
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Date: 3/28/2012 3:03:00 PM
I think it`s wonderful the way it is Phyllis. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/29/2012 11:09:00 AM
thanks Anne Lise. love phyl

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