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All Seasonal Refrain

From the chimes settling morning— Another time, another change I slept in your clothes yesterday; The break in brass and sleep numbing Red blur— buried color, holding The lasting eyes in my love's grave— Would this dawn, you could only stay, Instead heaps of morning glories Summer beats down, passing morning On from our daydreams in the night. Your ghost on some green there walking, In shadows and flowers besides. Winter, approach as ice now freed— Our love for time, distance of chimes.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/31/2024 6:56:00 PM

Dear Paige, lovely poetess, I am deeply moved by the melancholy mood and beauty of your poem. Such emotional and soulful imagery “Another time, another change/I slept in your clothes yesterday” - so very poignant, potent and intimate. The creative expression in this heartfelt piece is exquisite. Warmest wishes my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/30/2024 3:14:00 AM

Lovely imagery for sadness expressed! Hugs, Paige!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 8/29/2024 9:16:00 AM

So lovely, such a comfort; I lost my husband this year. Although I know he is far better off, I miss him dearly. Sometimes, I feel his presence in the familiar chair that he always used. Love that unique line "I slept in your clothes, yesterday."

Ink Empress

Date: 8/29/2024 5:01:00 AM

Ah the depth of this truly hits my soul so very deeply! I love especially the line “ Another time, another change I slept in your clothes yesterday;” and ofcourse you did the form very well: the metaphors and how youv played around with words to express truly is impressive. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 8/28/2024 7:10:00 PM

To experience all these moments again... after what you have been through this year.... hugs sweatheart! Keep moving forward, it is healing so healing to write what you are feeling! " Your ghost on some green there walking, In shadows and flowers besides." I hope I am remembered with such love. With all my support Paige! A.S.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 9/2/2024 4:15:00 PM

I appretiate you clarifying this I truly was concerned that you were having a rough moment. All my very best A.S.

Paige Hind
Date: 8/29/2024 3:07:00 PM

Hello, my dear friend. I lost my dad in February, but this is not about him. For personal reasons, my muse has been led to write about death... I have my reasons, but anyway, thank you, you are such a kind soul, A.S.