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Alaska Glaciers

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Glacial hills rise elevating fervid sights Mesmerizing desires adorned turquoise blue Arousing cobalt passions in sapphire heights Floating cotton balls on melting cyan hue. Above your scenic view gloats the sunlit sky Lifting eager vibes upon hearing my sigh Urging the frozen glaciers to woo romance Embracing zealous emotions held in trance. October 18, 2018 Rhyme: abab ccdd. Eight lines, 11 syllables each Placed 3rd:Mid March 2019 contest by Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2022 2:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. I can imagine the sight of the glaciers are awesome. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/11/2020 5:45:00 PM

Very descriptive and creative, Vijay. I enjoyed it :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/14/2019 9:48:00 PM

Once again, your thoughts bring both a cool touch and a steaming warmth. Wonderful feeling. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/13/2019 9:47:00 AM

You enchant with your words in this gorgeous poem that you have ended spectacularly! Congratulations on your win Vijay! : ) xxoo

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/23/2018 8:47:00 PM

Your breathtaking and romantic imagery flows ever so gracefully, Vijay. I especially love your last two lines; 'Urging the frozen glaciers to woo romance Embracing zealous emotions held in trance.' Pure poetry, my friend. Warmest wishes for a joyous holiday season.. ~Susan

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/21/2018 11:41:00 AM

Very creative write, VJ! To evoke such warm feeling from a frozen landscape is poetic genius. I felt the love, and it sent chills down my spine. Mighty fine ink strokes, my dear friend. Love and more love always.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/29/2018 5:18:00 PM

Ah, the reawakening of the frozen heart! Just beautiful, Vijay! Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/29/2018 5:56:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn. I'm delighted by your visit and comments.

Warren Doll

Date: 10/29/2018 11:18:00 AM

Brilliant description and choice of photograph, Vijay. As I read it, I felt I was there. Wonderful! ~Warren

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/29/2018 3:08:00 PM

Thank you warren..appreciate the kind remarks.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/28/2018 10:01:00 AM

Well expressed, one day I hope to see the glaciers in person. There is much below the surface with this metaphor for love.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/29/2018 3:07:00 PM

Thank you Richard..appreciate the kind feedback.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/26/2018 1:27:00 PM

So lovely the glaciers and your wonderful description, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/29/2018 3:07:00 PM

Thank you Kim..appreciate the visit and kind remarks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/26/2018 7:11:00 AM

Vijay, you are a master of description. This is BEAUTIFUL! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2018 10:01:00 AM

Thank you Janice for your kind feedback.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/25/2018 12:19:00 PM

A pristine paradise is envisioned in your romantic poem Vijay! I lived and worked there for a time. It is beautiful! Hawaii shares a kind of kinship with Alaska with not being a part of the mainland and in high cost of living. We are often excluded in being able to receive mail shipping free. : )

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2018 9:59:00 AM

Yes-it is such a beautiful state..amazing landscape even beyond the glaciers. You live in a beautiful state as well. I agree..both so expensive even for visitors. Thank you Connie.

Deb Radke

Date: 10/24/2018 2:14:00 PM

Very good, Vijay. I enjoyed this enormously. I lived for several years in Alaska and have incredible memories of touring Prince William Sound, at times coming quite close to some of the glaciers. You do justice to their awesome beauty. Well done. Best wishes. Deb

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2018 10:00:00 AM

Thank you Deb..we loved Alaska..been there twice so far. Many thanks for your kind feedback.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/23/2018 12:52:00 PM

Smashing write Vijay, really brings home the reality of the glaciers, truly splendid!Blessings,Gordon

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2018 10:02:00 AM

Thank you Gordon..appreciate your kind feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/20/2018 1:10:00 PM

- Nature's beauty both in word and image, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2018 1:25:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise..appreciate your kind feedback.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/20/2018 11:21:00 AM

My favorite color is blue; all blues. Love the photo and they do, "Urging the frozen glaciers to woo romance Embracing zealous emotions held in trance." This was a mesmerizing pen for a person who loves blue, especially; had to "Fav"; well done my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2018 1:24:00 PM

Your generous comments are much appreciated..many thanks, M.L.K.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/20/2018 9:59:00 AM

How I wish I cloud climb those glacial peaks, place my warm hand on it and melt them to the river. lol, I love your imagery Vij, thank you for listening to me audio meditation, I really appreciate your support, hugs.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2018 1:24:00 PM

Many thanks Pixie..appreciate your visit and comments.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/20/2018 7:24:00 AM

Hi Vijay, such awesome imagery painted by your words. This piece is alive, I feel as if I can walk right into this wondrous scene. This is a joy to read this morning. This write sings for me Vijay. This is an awesome fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2018 8:17:00 AM

Thank you Mike..your generous feedback is always a pleasure to read. Appreciate your visit and comments.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/19/2018 3:27:00 PM

Beauty , warmth and the scent of love in the presence of "frozen glaciers"! Only a highly talented poet could soar high with his imagination to set his words of pearls colours and value! A jeweller masterfully picking up the rarest of his gems to adorn his fine work! A FAV. Always a great pleasure to read your beauties dear Vijay. Best regards. Blessed be always.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/19/2018 3:53:00 PM

A pleasure to read such generous comments. So much warmth and care in your words. My best regards to you as well, Besma. Appreciate your visit and comments, as always.

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/18/2018 7:11:00 PM

Cool Vijay...very cool...love & light...^WW^

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/19/2018 5:59:00 AM

Thank you WW.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2018 6:05:00 PM

Passion in the far north regions. COOL one, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/19/2018 5:59:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/18/2018 5:30:00 PM

ohh, journeying with you in this wondrous place vibrantly portrayed, vijay...beautiful pen!..huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/18/2018 5:55:00 PM

Appreciate the kind feedback..thank you, nette.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/18/2018 4:11:00 PM

Beautifully written Vijay. I feel I am right there, seeing it :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/18/2018 5:54:00 PM

Thank you Heidi..appreciate your support and comments.

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/18/2018 11:51:00 AM

A fitting tribute to such a glorious sight, well done my friend...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/18/2018 1:10:00 PM

Many thanks Charlie..appreciate your kind feedback.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/18/2018 10:30:00 AM

Oh my, and you make icy mountains- those tender skies painted in blue with clouds of white, sound soooo inviting. Is it possible to be warm, while being cold all at the same time.?? Yes!! Your thoughts take me there. This is beautiful in every way. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/18/2018 10:50:00 AM

Thank you Brandy..you bring smiles with your comments. I appreciate the fact that you take the time to elaborate..and you are always on point.