Aha Haiku

sea as calm as glass adrift on the gentle swells a black fin circling

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Charles Reese

Date: 8/16/2014 6:59:00 PM

A wonderful haiku congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2014 8:22:00 PM

yes, This is what I am talking about. This is a good haiku for me!!! Congrats on your win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/8/2014 12:57:00 PM

Wud really be a must see sight Barbara! Very lovely haiku n great win! Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 11:52:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 1:29:00 AM

A very clear picture you have painted well, Barb

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/3/2014 8:12:00 PM

nice one, barbara! i can picture it so clearly...

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/3/2014 7:39:00 PM

Good one, Barbara. Good luck!

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/3/2014 5:52:00 PM

niceeee..good luck..I've actually seen a sea that looked like glass it's an amazing sight

Tim Smith

Date: 8/3/2014 5:34:00 PM

Watch out and stay out of the water :) hugs Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 8/3/2014 5:03:00 PM

Oh scaryyyyy! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx