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Weeping Willow

from long slim limbs of the re-birthed weeping willow . . . nesting robins’ song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 4/9/2025 2:44:00 AM
In any form, your poems shine. This is a great work on nature. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/7/2025 8:20:00 PM
Beautiful image. lovely write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 4/6/2025 10:30:00 PM
Nature has become alive once more with verdant shades and bird songs. The word 'rebirthed' adds so much effect to your spring haiku. Congratulations Andrea on your first place win.
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Date: 4/6/2025 3:26:00 PM
a pretty poem and picture - congratulations! I wish I were resting under that tree.
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Date: 4/6/2025 12:20:00 PM
Back with congratulations to you Andrea, I love those trees by the water. Tom
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Date: 4/6/2025 10:42:00 AM
This is nice. Well done and congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/6/2025 10:14:00 AM
- Congratulations on your spring haiku, Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 4/6/2025 7:41:00 AM
Love the willow with the nesting robins. Congratulations Andrea! :)
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Date: 4/6/2025 6:55:00 AM
Andrea, a beautiful haiku, love the weeping willow imagery. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 4/3/2025 11:41:00 AM
Andrea, looks like a nice spot. Thanks for sharing signs of the season! Smiles!
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Date: 4/2/2025 2:02:00 PM
That's my tree, I'm sure it is, but I don't know where it is. Saw one I planted at old house yesterday, it had been WAY trimmed, was shorter than when we left. (no car there, so I walked the property & took lots of pics.) LOVE LOVE the picture and the Haiku is all that it should be, just as you are ... CayCay
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Date: 4/2/2025 11:06:00 AM
We have one, not as fancy as this one, yet. Love Spring with pretty coloring, then green lasts until Fall. Hugs
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Date: 4/1/2025 1:43:00 PM
Don't mind if i sing along.? Good one Andrea.'
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Date: 4/1/2025 10:42:00 AM
Beautiful picture and a nice poem. Brings serenity to mind.
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Date: 4/1/2025 8:47:00 AM
Dear Andrea, I always love a great Haiku and yours is one of the ones I love. I also love Willow Trees!! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 4/1/2025 5:26:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, for sharing this one with us. It is a beautiful work and snapshot. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 4/1/2025 5:24:00 AM
A beautiful spring Haiku Andrea
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Date: 4/1/2025 12:46:00 AM
Lovely to read and see Andrea. We had a weeping willow tree it was beautiful but sadly as the years went by they cut it down...Hugs
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Date: 3/31/2025 8:48:00 PM
A lovely spring poem
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Date: 3/31/2025 8:17:00 PM
very pretty
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Date: 3/31/2025 4:01:00 PM
Weeping willows and robins… can’t ask much more than that. A smashing spring write that gives me a yearning to be lake side.
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Date: 3/31/2025 2:42:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea; soothing and healing. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 3/31/2025 1:16:00 PM
- Lovely haiku, Andrea... the birth of spring :) - Best wishes :) - hugs
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Date: 3/31/2025 1:12:00 PM
Lovely image Andrea, best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 3/31/2025 10:53:00 AM
Welcoming in spring as nature awakens, loved reading your Haiku Andrea. xx
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