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A Shower of Dirtiness

Getting clean in a hot shower Gives you a smell like a flower Pretty and fragrant like a a rose From your head down to your toes But when you are really flirty I don't feel clean--just dirty Steaming up the glass door Clothes are scattered on the floor Soaping up its slippery Falling for your trickery To join you in this fun game This hot waters like a flame Pulsating on us strong and steady Until we both are ready To get warm and really cozy Under blankets--cheeks so rosy From the hotness we just shared Not one ounce of love was spared As we got dirty in the action Leading to desired passion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/24/2015 6:02:00 PM
Robin. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
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Robin Davis
Date: 7/25/2015 11:45:00 AM
thanks so much Linda. glad you enjoyed it. have a nice day
Date: 7/22/2015 2:43:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win robin!
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Robin Davis
Date: 7/22/2015 8:29:00 AM
thank you so much for the great comment. glad you enjoyed it. Have a nice day
Date: 7/21/2015 8:12:00 AM
Love your poem... So hot and flirty! Congrats on your win!
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Robin Davis
Date: 7/22/2015 8:29:00 AM
thank you for the nice comment. glad you enjoyed it. have a nice day
Date: 7/20/2015 8:49:00 PM
Quick, pass me a towel! This flirt is throbbin', Robin- congrates! Regards, Viv
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Robin Davis
Date: 7/22/2015 8:30:00 AM
Passing you a cold towel. LOL thanks for the nice comment. glad you enjoyed it. Have a nice day
Date: 7/20/2015 2:34:00 PM
Robin, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
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Robin Davis
Date: 7/22/2015 8:31:00 AM
thanks SKAT for the nice comment. glad you enjoyed it. have a nice day.
Date: 7/20/2015 2:26:00 PM
ooh hot and steamy Robin - you came back with a bang! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Robin Davis
Date: 7/22/2015 8:32:00 AM
you better get under some cold water Jan. LOL Have a nice day. thanks for the nice comment.
Date: 7/20/2015 1:53:00 PM
Good to see you back! Thanks for joining my contest and great job ;)
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Robin Davis
Date: 7/22/2015 8:33:00 AM
Thanks for the welcome back. glad you enjoyed my poem and placing me in your contest. Have a nice day
Date: 3/31/2014 6:27:00 PM
ooh la la. this one is HOT and dirty. I liked it!!!
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:52:00 PM
WOW, get rid of the dirtiness. Another great ending. SKAT
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