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A Ray of Sunshine

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In the depths of January's blustery cold The poet's life in poems slowly unfolds A mood of blue is often set Melancholy seems to be her usual cuddly soft pet But sometimes the table is quickly turned Out pours some humor that she learned Maybe she's bipolar like it's called today At least a ray of sunshine came her way Form used 7,7,7, 9 words per stanza, Rhyme scheme aabb, ccdd

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 2/9/2022 9:25:00 AM

I love this poem, Sara. It is simple, yet it touches you with every line. Happy for that ray of sunshine. A fave!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/9/2022 1:21:00 PM

Why, thank you, Sandra. Your visit made my day a little brighter. I am glad that you found it suitable to fave. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 1/23/2022 7:11:00 PM

Through the gloom of darkness, a streak of light filters in. It is enough to make the surroundings brighter ! A beautiful poem, Sara !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/24/2022 4:52:00 AM

Valsa, Your kind review of my work is a light itself. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 1/18/2022 4:38:00 AM

Nice rhyme, great poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/18/2022 8:51:00 AM

Thank you, Scott. I appreciate your visit. Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/17/2022 5:06:00 PM

Bipolar makes for some uncertain moments, for sure. I'm glad she found some sun.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/18/2022 6:07:00 AM

M.L., Thanks for dropping by. Yes, a person with true bipolar is probably hard to figure out. Sara

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 1/16/2022 4:37:00 AM

Mrs Sara , Excellent poem, thank you for sharing this!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/16/2022 1:59:00 PM

Mulu, I am delighted that you said it is excellent. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/15/2022 11:12:00 PM

"Maybe she's bipolar like it's called today" Funny how we want to label every person and quirk now. The 7779 cadence is so much fun to read, I am going to try it myself.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/16/2022 1:59:00 PM

Thank you Caren. I hope you do try it. Sara

Deb M

Date: 1/15/2022 11:03:00 PM

Hey Sara…..lovely poem and ray of sunshine!! Debx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/16/2022 1:56:00 PM

Your comments were uplifting. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 1/15/2022 3:39:00 PM

Aah, a Lind30. Thanks for the sunshine and the well written poem, Sara. You still got it! Write On! Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/16/2022 1:54:00 PM

Thank you, Bill. Your comments were encouraging. Sara

Silpika Kalita

Date: 1/15/2022 2:57:00 PM

What a beautiful exquisite symbolic write. Quote enigmatic Sara... Silpika

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/15/2022 3:30:00 PM

Silpika, Thank you for the kind review of my work. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/14/2022 1:58:00 PM

Such a ray of sunshine in your beautiful poem Sara! I hope you are blessed with many more golden warm rays of joy and sunshine my sweet poet friend. God bless you! I hope you and all your precious loved ones are now healthy and doing well <3

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/15/2022 2:36:00 AM

BJ, I need the blessings and rays of joy. Thanks for asking God's blessings on me. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my work. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/13/2022 3:43:00 AM

Shouldn't we all have a ray of sunshine? Lovely poem. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/15/2022 2:30:00 AM

Yes, Victor, we should have a ray of sunshine and a ray of hope in this life. Thanks for the blessings. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 1/12/2022 9:30:00 AM

Great verse, Sara. Blessing to you thorough out your new year my friend.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/15/2022 2:28:00 AM

Thank you, Eve, for the blessings for the New Year. We need all of those blessings we can get in our present circumstances. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/12/2022 8:28:00 AM

- Really well written, Sara - Yesterday we had a beautiful sunny day ... today, the day is gray and heavy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/13/2022 9:19:00 AM

SS, I am so glad you had a good day. Those good ones sprinkled in there during the winter help it to go by much better. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/12/2022 7:51:00 AM

Hi Sara, I really enjoyed this. We all can use a bit of sunshine. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day-Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/12/2022 8:17:00 AM

Alexis, We do need a little ray and sometimes a whole day's worth. Sunlight does have healing effects on the body and in winter it feels so good. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/10/2022 9:04:00 PM

How lovely, Sara! I really needed the ray of sunshine that you have so poetically provided here. Thank you so much! Joy forever, Gershon

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/11/2022 4:02:00 AM

Gershon, I do need that happiness in my life because some days are not so easy. Your visit is appreciated. Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/10/2022 8:46:00 PM

I like this, Sara! I haven't tried this form yet but you did an excellent job with it. Blessings, Kim M

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/11/2022 4:00:00 AM

Why, thank you..Sara

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/10/2022 1:05:00 PM

Is it the cold blues! "Melancholy seems to be her usual cuddly soft pet " isn't it everybody poet's! So beautifully expressed in terms of the cold. "Out pours some humor that she learned" Delightful imagery! "Form and Rhyme scheme" from the first Haiku i figured you are a complete poet. Thanks - Marshall

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/10/2022 3:21:00 PM

Marshall, I think I lean towards melancholy because it is a personality trait that is inherited. Your presence at my page was uplifting. Sara

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/10/2022 12:20:00 PM

A most wonderful and a very creative new composition. Depth, imagery rhyme and heart all score. Soupmail sent on the final verse. A fav.. God bless..

Robert Lindley
Date: 1/10/2022 2:50:00 PM

I miscount myself so often in my compositions that usually I have to do three counts to be sure. And those last minute -edits- get me so often. This is indeed a brilliant first outing in this new Lind30 poetry form. Thank you for gifting a wonderful new poem that hits the marks. God bless.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/10/2022 2:21:00 PM

Robert, I did add a word to correct how I thought it would sound and that was when I made the error of having ten words. Whoa!! Thanks for the visit and for faving my work. Sara