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A Jocular Hint - My Soliloquy

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Written: May 6th 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It's tough to revel in delight, but I grew! Dreams rouse me, not in an aphonic view. Nature provides her bounty every day, I extend my hand and grasp her sway. I perceive my youthful self in that place, Her offerings were serendipitous grace. In her sphere, blooms, and waterfalls, A supple deer, an oaring raptor, in altar calls. Each contributes to a feeling of calmness, She was a fountain of pure suaveness. Yet wars and famine steal my breath away, A sight, luring amid a rutted path of ruby clay. A moody inquiry into the root of my being, A fleeting time of pure delightful feeling! Thus, I wound up shooting my future ego, Lift a glass, not a pistol, in a sky-dip indigo. I rise again, and the sun surrounds me, I can predict zodiac signs and lunar spree. Along with Mars, Venus, and other oddities, My mind spills, leaving no room for prodigies. I shot for my destiny with this radical rhetoric, Pulling me up a path reflected as historic. A flash of his pistol, a gaze that said, walk, My handgun babbled in its wandering talk.
 

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Date: 5/8/2024 5:28:00 AM
SP, I listened to the recording of Beethoven's Ode to Joy and thanks for posting the music. Very optimistic piece. Seems like you have a connection to something larger than yourself in this write. Was there a period in life of disillusionment? Seems as though you came through it with flying colors!
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Date: 5/7/2024 7:26:00 AM
Hello Sotto, I felt I was dancing with introspection and resilience, a testament to the growth journey amidst life's challenges. I loved your exploration of youth and nostalgia with a longing for peace and understanding. May your path be illuminated by the sun's radiance, guided by the stars, and marked by the echoes of your poetic spirit. Keep rising, keep shining, and keep walking towards your historic destiny. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/7/2024 5:41:00 AM
Intriguing dialogue of thoughts, my friend. Your poem takes the reader on mysterious journey through dreams and realities. Something to pause and reflect on. Destiny has the final word.
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Date: 5/7/2024 5:41:00 AM
"Her blooms and waterfalls" are a calming sight, well penned Sotto
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Date: 5/6/2024 3:49:00 PM
jocular indeed, dear Sotto. Yours was a light-hearted, engaging, and smooth-flowing Soliloquy. Shakespeare would be proud! Have a pleasant evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 5/6/2024 3:12:00 PM
Interesting work. I like the song, "Joyful, Joyful We Adore Thee". I think it has such a wonderful beat to it. Thanks for sharing the poem with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 5/6/2024 2:34:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative write. Have a wonderful day/week..................
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