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a hiku for spring

first blossoms on the cherry tree . . . dawn winks pink

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Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 4/28/2025 12:40:00 AM

Beautiful poem as always.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2025 7:37:00 AM

Ahhh!! Beauty in spring. It must be beautiful. Sara K

Byeol Captain

Date: 4/27/2025 5:14:00 AM

Nice, small concise and at the point.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/26/2025 9:50:00 PM

Like it super-much! :) gw

Paige Hind

Date: 4/26/2025 5:00:00 PM

"dawn winks pink" love that

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/26/2025 8:43:00 PM

Thanx!

Terry Flood

Date: 4/26/2025 3:56:00 PM

How I wish, just once in a while, I could be so succinct. I have a massive cherry tree, absolutely smothered with double pink blooms… Should I choose to describe it, I’d need rather more than eleven syllables. So well done, Andrea. Terry

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/26/2025 8:44:00 PM

Thanks. I have written many times on my cherry willow. This is shortest poem on it!

Ink Empress

Date: 4/26/2025 11:57:00 AM

This is so beautiful elegant and tender sweet Andrea! I see why this got first place! Youv delivered a hiku so beautiful and vivid in imagery! Pleasure reading you today! sending you light always! Misses

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/26/2025 8:44:00 PM

Thanks so much, Ink

Howard Kerr

Date: 4/26/2025 2:38:00 AM

Hi Andrea, This is an immaculate hiku superbly executed. It has a natural beauty suffused with fine colours. Excellent Howard

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/26/2025 8:45:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment