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A Giant Pumpkin

A giant pumpkin With the fruit scooped out for pie A Halloween treat I make a Jack-O-Lantern And grin at its glowing face For Susan’s tanka contest

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/18/2012 8:51:00 AM

Sent to you soupmail, Jack...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/15/2012 2:37:00 AM

yes to this, jack... my finest congrats!..:) huggs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/14/2012 4:23:00 AM

Big congrats from Spain Jack, let me know how things are? xx

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/13/2012 10:17:00 PM

well done, great tanka Lee

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/13/2012 12:38:00 AM

congratulations Jack...hugs!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2012 4:10:00 PM

Congrats!!!!Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 10/12/2012 8:02:00 AM

Love this Halloween Tanka Jack! Congrats on the win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2012 12:24:00 AM

Congrats, JAck, again!!! the cutest halloween tanka around.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/11/2012 11:13:00 PM

Beautiful Jack, Many congrats on this win.

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/11/2012 7:07:00 PM

Nicely written for Halloween. Congratulations on your win in Susan's contest.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/11/2012 4:18:00 PM

It was so much fun to have a kid at Halloween! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/11/2012 12:44:00 PM

A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/11/2012 5:56:00 AM

I love this one Jack :) all the best for the contest! my week's been busy but I am not complaining. :) lfde Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2012 3:26:00 PM

Ahh!..Enjoyed reading ...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Sara

Terry O'Leary

Date: 10/9/2012 12:32:00 PM

Good tanka!!! Good luck in the contest!! Terry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2012 12:41:00 AM

Cool one, Jack, and here is something you HAVE to try. Take the seeds out and do NOT throw away. Clean them, dry them on paper towels and then cook them on a buttered cookie sheet till brown. they are so yummy. I do not crack them open like the sunflower seeds. Just eat them whole!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/7/2012 10:15:00 PM

It is fun for adults and children alike to carve a pumpkin and enjoy it for a few days, even better to make a pie or pumpkin soup from them. I enjoyed your poem as it brought back such Halloween fun memories. Mahalo

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/7/2012 2:23:00 PM

YES! Thank you Jack for a glorious Halloween Jack-O-Lantern! With the glowing face and all! And we do use the insides for pumpkin pie...sometimes! Some of the pumpkins don't have very good insides for pie! We usually have thirty something Jack-O-Lanterns on our front porch for Halloween! We carve a pumpkin, at least one per day, all the way up to Halloween! It keeps everything fresh for Halloween! I usually have two or three favorites! Done many so far! This is an awesome write, Great Work!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/7/2012 1:54:00 PM

Scrumptios pumpkin pie!! I could sit and eat a whole one if no one were around to share it! Nice tanka, Jack..I took a pic of a stuffed animal that is from the Mirage Night Club in honor of that tiger...I will post it to my blog later this wk...here's to another start of a great wk!! gwendolen