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A Collared Dove

Out of heaven,the good Lord made a garden that does not fade, each Spring,His season,to renew greeness with much grandeur to view; Robins,starlings and sparrows new, missel thrushes and blackbirds too, nestling and nuture,here for free just as He does,for you and me; With pure innocence that I love , the soft and simple collared dove, a fragile home of twigs and sticks on which she, precarious sits. This symbol of peace and love,to we on earth,from heaven above Inspired by Debbie's latest contest see more at Gen 8 and Mt 3:16

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Date: 4/12/2010 11:11:00 PM
Very impressive title. Congrats on the win
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Date: 4/10/2010 10:23:00 AM
A lovely poem about a precious bird. congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 4/10/2010 7:26:00 AM
Congrats Brian on your winning poem and placement in Debbie's contest.. a beautiful inspirational truthful poem from your gifted pen .. enjoy your win today..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/7/2010 9:34:00 AM
The white Dove, the symbol of love. God's Love is So True. A Beautiful One. Cheers.
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Date: 4/7/2010 5:45:00 AM
Dear Brian, this is a beautiful,symbolic sonnet of profound insight and meaning. Lainie
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Date: 4/6/2010 7:12:00 PM
Working on mine ... a beautiful Sonnet full of inspiration with much grandeur to view..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/6/2010 2:01:00 PM
A poem as soft and fragile, as the home of twigs and sticks....quite beautiful, and a wonderful entry in Deborah's contest. Best wishes with this gem! ... Carrie
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Date: 4/6/2010 12:43:00 PM
Hmmm, Deb has another contest. I have to check this out! thanks for your explanations. I still think your trifling footle should be a "form"! This poem was lovely. Andrea
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Date: 4/6/2010 11:54:00 AM
I love birds..love your poem Brian..BG
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Date: 4/6/2010 7:56:00 AM
Well Written Brian... very good.. Michael
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Date: 4/6/2010 7:36:00 AM
Great spring write and great testimony of your faith...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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