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A Liquid Pool of Night

I carried a liquid pool of night in my pocket In a glass tied with black ribbon There it lay, snug and tight The day was overly long The night was due I reached inside my pocket Took out the glass tied with black ribbon Poured out some liquid night and watched the suns' changing hue Tied with a ribbon, velvet and dark Strewn with stars I carried a pool of liquid night In my pocket There it lay Snug and tight Awaiting for tomorrows' night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/7/2012 10:30:00 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be truly exceptional Matthew. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/2/2010 4:19:00 PM
Great metaphoric language used in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/2/2010 4:14:00 PM
Enchanting. Captured my soul and left me wanting more. If as I am there waiting, in anticipation, for the liquid to be poured. Mac
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