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Spring Enchantment a love poem

Spring Enchantment (a love poem) As wisps of clouds creeped overhead before a storm moving quickly east, the moon lay down his vanilla beams to dispel the darkness hiding our bared feet — set side by side — romantically touching for warmth, for love, for eternity, hopefully, to envelop us, like the coming rain in our lives’ thundering, combined heartbeats …joined into those duets passion will release all about from the great springs of yearning. (c) s.y. Eslinger 3/2024 Thanks be to God——

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Date: 5/16/2024 12:00:00 AM
Beautifully expressed well done and congratulations.
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Date: 5/12/2024 8:18:00 PM
Very nice, Sally.
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Date: 5/1/2024 8:45:00 AM
Sally, this is great...you have a very optimistic and charming view/style on human relationships. I will try to come back and read more of your work when I have some time. It's very pleasant to see what you write since it is unique and fun.
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Date: 4/26/2024 4:26:00 PM
Hello Sally, congratulations on your POTW. Also my fav. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 4/7/2024 7:59:00 PM
"set side by side — romantically touching for warmth, for love, for eternity," Very beautiful, Sally. POTW well deserved.
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Date: 4/5/2024 3:20:00 PM
A beautiful and stunning serenade to the steady fortress of your enduring love, knowing of your recent health challenges this must be a great comfort to you-
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Date: 4/5/2024 1:53:00 AM
Congrats for your mention as the best. Because it is indeed beautiful to read. A great romantic poem.
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Date: 4/4/2024 9:34:00 PM
A truly sublime poem ~ warmest congratulations on POTW, Sally dear
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Date: 4/4/2024 6:37:00 AM
OMG, my thanks for this honor and to my beloved brother & sister poets for all the wonderful comments!
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Date: 4/4/2024 6:05:00 AM
An enchanting poem indeed. Congrats on Potw
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Date: 4/3/2024 7:42:00 PM
This is quite lovely, Sally :)
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Date: 4/3/2024 5:14:00 PM
Beautiful romantic poem, Dear Poet. Images as - "the moon lay down his vanilla beams to dispel the darkness hiding our bared feet" are stunning! Congratulations on POTW.
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Date: 4/1/2024 3:51:00 PM
how lovely and romantic Sally, many congrats on POTW:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/1/2024 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on POTW!
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Date: 4/1/2024 2:10:00 AM
Beautiful and romantic Sally, congratulations on having received the honour of poem of the week… Beryl
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Date: 3/31/2024 11:31:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your POTW, Sally! Enjoy your special week of recognition, my kind friend. Awesome poetry! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 3/31/2024 4:32:00 PM
' the moon lay down his vanilla beams, set side by side — romantically. ' Such a beautiful image. Your thoughts are dreamy, romantic and magical. Congratulations Sally, on Poem of the Week. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 3/31/2024 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your romantic/beautiful write. "Happy Easter" Have a blessed day.....................
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Date: 3/31/2024 7:18:00 AM
A beautiful and romantic love poem dear Sally. Congratulations on the POTW honor! :)
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Date: 3/31/2024 5:32:00 AM
Sally, a wonderful romantic poem, congratulations on POTW.
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Date: 3/31/2024 5:14:00 AM
Dear Sally, I am so happy for you, getting the POTW! So well deserved for such a wonderful poem! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/31/2024 1:11:00 AM
Congratulations to you Sally on your romantic verse being POTW. Tom
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Date: 3/30/2024 3:57:00 PM
I like your romantic and passionate love poet, Sally. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 3/29/2024 5:50:00 AM
Wonderfully romantic--a poem filled with passion, Sally. --romantically touching for warmth, for love, for eternity---much enjoyed the tender voice of your poem.
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Date: 3/29/2024 4:50:00 AM
Dear Sally, is a breathtaking ode to love and nature's beauty. The imagery of wisps of clouds, the moon's vanilla beams, and the impending storm sets a scene of intimacy and anticipation. I love how your words capture the essence of love's warmth and hope for eternity with such tender elegance. Your poem stirs emotions of passion and longing. It's a masterpiece that envelops the reader in the enchantment of spring and the magic of love's embrace. - Blessings, Daniel
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