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' Four-Season-Fall '

~*~ =========================== SULTRY zephyr's gust incinerate milieu Estival breath perfumed the whimsical view Perfect metamorphosed season ensued Torrid wind whistled as fall foliage mind-glued Exquisite maple leaves cascade in vivid red - auburn dyes Moon of AUTUMN's nocturnal murk in premature soar - in it's crib, he lies Bursting colours of halcyon "era" - gilt, aureate carpet of terra firma Enticing, alluring realm cuddled with perky pigments, WINTER's ready and waiting Reminiscing the "SEPTEMBER FALL" is harking back from my myriad tears in SPRING. ~*~ ============================================================== *-* jun-jun villanueva *-* Carol Brown's FALL contest

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Date: 9/8/2011 12:09:00 AM
Hi Jun-jun, congratulations on your win. You paint a lovely picture of the four seasons. Well done. Lee
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:09:00 PM
This is awesome. Gilt, areate carpet is BRILLIANT like seeing the intricate pattern of a spider's web to closely examine the patterns YOU have woven here. Prime stuff! Cheers and congrats on your win, Cyndi
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:05:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,jun-jun
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:17:00 PM
Jun, Nice poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/7/2011 7:32:00 PM
Congrats on your great win in Carol's contest..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2011 4:55:00 PM
Many congrats to you, Junjun : )
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Date: 9/7/2011 2:16:00 PM
hey jun-jun congrats on your win, very vivid really loved this one..David
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:58:00 PM
Beautiful description of autumn, Jun-Jun, and I really enjoyed the last two lines. Nice bit of introspection there. In winter we pray for spring, in summer we pray for fall. Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:32:00 PM
your words overflow, jun!..… a happy blast of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:25:00 AM
congrats jun-jun on third place win with this cool write on Fall my friend.. superbly done..luv..
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2011 8:47:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2011 6:17:00 AM
A fine entry for the contest Jun Jun. Good luck and thannks so much for the heads up on my contest entry. I hadn't seen where it said no names in the rules. I fixed it. :) God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:56:00 PM
Hi,jun jun. YOu covered a lot of seasonal ground with your entry Best of luck in the contest and a good night to you.Luv, Andrea
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