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Eyes! My eyes cry and wonder in the mind of time and space
 What can the matter be What went wrong in the fallen zone rainlaying in the sacred zones courting by faith day. Eyes my eyes did with contentment with wide dream or vision or  two eyes cried for joy and crying happy shouts the clouds of smooth wind blow blew smooth winds that blew blow a roar float the clouds above the sleeping veil just a dream I wonder again and again happiness  seems to  embrace my emotions all of a sudden!? Walking on clouds what a vision this was! But
 What has caused such a  wake-up dream tears shaking in my body is a right now call? A  destiny cry with my name on  the written scroll! My tear-stained pillow my brown eyes glisten in the whisper around the corner from night night shined and rain poured down from the sky soft scented raindrop kisses that rested on the cheeks and lips as rivers of emotions flowed the study stream   watered the  the kingdoms trees and the sweet grass aroma from acoss the valley low as the eyes  different seem to dance hand and hand danced in the wind the clouds morning dim  cup  of light My 
    Pillows caressed three times my skin tones A new day rises above  the  
        comfort zone  but now understanding has graced my fate to say that was it walking in my valley my shadow of tears as a child newborn child receiving joy from my friends and then Father brought the love that can hear, see and smell a multitude of fragrance tones so listened  from away repeat  again as the first time my dream  echo sound.  The Eyes! my eyes. A love song from afar seems to whisper my name over and over again! Caress my cheeks to take away weeping may endure for a night this is known for joy comes in the morning light this is known Kisses of joy overwhelm sustained the shock of tears my very soul and my thoughts trembled in the night So my eyes flowed with cried  tears in the night but when was woke up around the  tight  nighty skies
                                 The loneliness was gone in the fallen zone
my balance regained the composure to regain what was lost what the dream seem to express  to my heart to balancemy dreams my vision 
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Date: 8/17/2024 4:02:00 PM
Wow! The way you spoke thank you!
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Date: 8/6/2024 11:01:00 PM
In our sleep we see strange dreams that can even make us cry. Sometimes we lose our balance, but come back to normalcy with our composure regained. Great write, dear Joyce.
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Brenda J. Joyce
Date: 8/17/2024 4:04:00 PM
Wow the way you spoke thanks
Date: 8/6/2024 4:39:00 PM
Sometimes we have those very emotional dreams but usually don't remember them as well. I can't imagine what we will see when we go to that home on high. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Brenda J. Joyce
Date: 8/17/2024 4:05:00 PM
wow, the way you spoke! thankyou!
Date: 6/18/2024 12:03:00 PM
gosh and with the video-- cured my headache somewhat!!
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Brenda J. Joyce
Date: 8/6/2024 7:33:00 AM
And you have made my day lol
Date: 6/18/2024 12:02:00 PM
ahh.. my senses are enraptured by this- such a stunning piece!
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Brenda J. Joyce
Date: 8/6/2024 7:33:00 AM
You are so kind have a good day lol
Date: 6/18/2024 11:50:00 AM
What a wonderful write/story. I will watch for more.... Have a blessed day writing away......................
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Brenda J. Joyce
Date: 8/6/2024 7:34:00 AM
Thank you dear Writer you are blessed lol
Date: 6/18/2024 10:49:00 AM
This seems like a story recounted in parts. One must expect part three. Quite a deep write. Keep it up and hope to see part three.
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Brenda J. Joyce
Date: 8/6/2024 7:35:00 AM
Now now Sir Victor let me think lol
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