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Mountain of ice a scene so awfully /\ 0 /\ ~ / \ o /\ ~~~~ / \ ~~~~/ \ ^ /\ O o / \ ~~ ¨~~/ \^^o 0 o------- /\ .... /\ ~~ ooo /\ __ ~~ Titanic sank oo ~~ ~~ ## darkness xxxx ~~~~ xxxx in the II III IIIII //// sea ( cold ... deep o O ) _________ o oo _________death there are no ballrooms for dancing on the seabed adventure - X - swallowed by the sea ////. \\\\ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 07.05.2023 Anne-Lise Andresen Copyright © All Rights Reserved no 1215 Sponsored by: Brian Strand 3rd place in the contest

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Paul Bell

Date: 5/14/2023 1:29:00 AM

Can't beat that for skill. Every time I go on a ship now, I always ask, how unsinkable is it.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/11/2023 7:37:00 PM

Fabulous shape poem! Warmest congratulations on your win, in Brian’s contest, with a podium finish!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/11/2023 1:24:00 PM

You wrote a fantastic poem about "Titanic." I truly enjoyed it. Congratulations on your win

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/11/2023 9:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Anne-Lise. "There are no ballrooms for dancing on the seabed." So poignant. Full of "impact!" So descriptive of the tragedy. Well done my friend. Blessings and hugs!

Len Gasun

Date: 5/11/2023 1:57:00 AM

Wow! So beautiful and creative! I love and extremely enjoy this. Congratulations on your shining win my dear poet friend Anne-Lise! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Roger Roger

Date: 5/11/2023 1:33:00 AM

Wow... Both lyrical and artistic... Congratulations...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2023 6:33:00 PM

there are no ballrooms for dancing on the seabed adventure…Wow!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/9/2023 2:25:00 AM

Great work, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2023 2:34:00 AM

- Thank you, Jo :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/8/2023 10:43:00 AM

Very creative and perfectly designed, Anne. A winner for sure, but good luck anyway

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2023 2:12:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Las :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/8/2023 8:01:00 AM

That was one sad event in the history of our world. So many thought it was going to be a great time at sea and a lovely visit to another country. Only a few survived. Thanks for sharing this one and for stopping by my page. It reads like a good contender for Brian's contest to me. Way to go. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2023 8:29:00 AM

- A journey that was supposed to be a pleasure... ended terribly, Sara - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs