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Everything that time or tide may tell a silver birch rise in an azure sky Moonbeam with its wrinkles and dry mouth captivated by the mournful music The perception of something eternal is in itself a utopia - but an encouragement on a cloudy day Don't tear up the roots or retouch the story An eternal escape as the waves Morals and principles despite the prize The traces of a heart that sought balm will be buried in the underworld forever 17.03.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - 'M' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 1st place in the contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/6/2023 4:24:00 PM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win! There is a poignant, throbbing depth in your words - "the perception of something eternal is in itself a utopia" that probes the heart. This is very special. This is going on my desk. Thank you! Hugs and Easter blessings of joy to you!

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 5:01:00 AM

Sunshine, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Love the image !

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/22/2023 7:31:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2023 10:51:00 AM

- Beata, many thanks for visit and congratulations :) - hugs

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/22/2023 3:08:00 AM

wow just great write; I enjoyed thoroughly; congrats for the placement

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/22/2023 3:34:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Mahtab :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/21/2023 12:52:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your well-deserved top win, Anne-Lise. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/22/2023 3:34:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Las :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/21/2023 9:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Mournful" is a very creative write/picture. Enjoyed It. Hugs. Have a great/blessed day writing away...........

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/22/2023 3:34:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Paula :) - hugs

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/21/2023 9:19:00 AM

" a silver birch rise in an azure sky" - Great image. Full of images and imageries. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/22/2023 3:33:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Alex :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/21/2023 8:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win, Dear Anne-Lise. You have handled the mysterious theme with originality - as you always do! Love ~ Mala

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/22/2023 3:33:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Mala :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/21/2023 7:24:00 AM

Written with strong sweet feeling Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your win! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/22/2023 3:33:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Linda :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 3/21/2023 7:00:00 AM

Very nicely penned Anne, I especially liked the first stanza..Congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/22/2023 3:32:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/21/2023 6:58:00 AM

Congratulations a beautiful touching poem so well rewarded with 1st place in the contest. So pleased this was awarded its rightful place Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/22/2023 3:32:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Wendy :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/19/2023 6:37:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. An encouragement on a cloudy day is such a good way to express the idea of saying just the right thing at the right time to lift someone up. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara..soupmail soon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2023 3:09:00 AM

- Thanks for reading and your comment, Sara :) - hugs

Deb M

Date: 3/19/2023 4:59:00 AM

Oh sunshine what a delightful poem…written beautifully! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2023 3:09:00 AM

- Many thanks, Deb :) - hugs

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/19/2023 2:07:00 AM

Love the theme, powerful poetry, good luck for the contest. Way to go, Anne-Lise. Harry

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2023 3:08:00 AM

- Many thanks, Harry ... glad you like it :) - hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/18/2023 9:49:00 PM

strong images, to welcome etrenity, who knows , brilliant pen have a good sunday yann

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2023 3:08:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Yann :) - hugs

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/18/2023 4:15:00 PM

a long night of sadness if I grasped the metaphor dear poet...good luck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2023 3:07:00 AM

- Thanks for reading and your comment, Frederic :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/18/2023 5:45:00 AM

Lovely poem. Excellent vocabulary, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2023 1:59:00 PM

- Thanks for reading and your comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/18/2023 4:07:00 AM

So sad and written so creatively Anne-Lise. Well done. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2023 1:58:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Wendy :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/18/2023 3:02:00 AM

Great thoughts despite the sadness.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2023 1:58:00 PM

- Victor, thanks for reading and your comment :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/17/2023 6:44:00 PM

Revelations come from the innermost parts of a sentient creature. Anne-Lise, your poem is beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2023 1:57:00 PM

- Thanks for reading and your comment, Las :) - hugs

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/17/2023 6:13:00 PM

Profound thoughts that are deep and soulful. Beautiful verse, Anne-Lise! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2023 1:57:00 PM

- Many thanks, Laura :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/17/2023 4:33:00 PM

Love those first two lines! A beautiful opener, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2023 1:57:00 PM

- Many thanks, Kim :) - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/17/2023 2:58:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile my fav. line is Everything that time or tide may tell a silver birch rise in an azure sky. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/19/2023 10:23:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile, Your welcome . Hugs. /Darlene/

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2023 1:56:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Darlene :) - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/17/2023 2:36:00 PM

My favorite line, "The perception of something eternal is in itself a Utopia" Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful weekend, Anne:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2023 1:54:00 PM

- Thanks for reading and your comment, Daniel :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/17/2023 1:15:00 PM

you always have the best photo and the best words too. Love this :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2023 1:33:00 PM

- Many thanks, Vie Rose ... glad you like it :) - hugs