Lost

A loss so great and it's too late to tell her so. now that she's gone there is no way to let her know Death closed the door and only death can give the key. There is no hope! She cannot hear. Oh! pity me.

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Ian Jones

Date: 7/11/2015 4:14:00 PM

Joseph, in March my wife died in my arms, trust me it doesn't make it any easier. She knew you loved her. Great sentiment. Kind regards, Ian

Joseph Leidig
Date: 7/12/2015 9:46:00 AM

Thank you for your very nice response. My condolences for your wife, that had to be exceptionally hard. JHL

Jan Allison

Date: 7/11/2015 9:45:00 AM

Beautifully expressed - my father passed away in february - we were 15 minutes too late but in reality I am pleased we weren't there at the end - I had said my goodbyes to him days before he died:-( Hugs Jan xx7

Joseph Leidig
Date: 7/11/2015 1:05:00 PM

My condolences for you and your family. thanks for your very nice response.