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Feel warmth and comfort in such close surrounds of this liquefied place, Yet there is movement of late, like a small tremor or a quake. The soft walls of my room start to quiver and shake as I'm moved, forcing me from familiar environs as downwards I am wooed. The life giving pulse quickens its pace, somehow I know that it is time, to leave my nurturing home and a new dwelling to find. My body makes changes for the new journey that I make, The womb drains away like a plug pulled from a lake. The canal is so small, feel restricted and confined, I wriggle and squirm, every movement clearly defined. The protective fluid in my lungs begin to drain and dry up, life giving air from the placenta I can no longer suck. At the end of the tunnel I feel a cooling on my head, As downwards I'm forced, am I alive or am I dead? A sudden explosion of lights and sounds bombard my whole being, as the tunnel is breached and I am hearing and seeing. The enormous pressure on my body make me cry out with shock, I am free now, I gaze around me and take stock. Such an incredible journey, yet I feel it has just begun. I am drained now, I curl up on my mum and suck on my thumb.

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Date: 4/27/2017 4:40:00 PM
Hi Craig, I am blown away a most beautiful description of birth ever have a I read :))) hugs from Ireland
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Old Man Emu
Date: 4/27/2017 5:09:00 PM
Thanks Niall, I forgot about this one. Cheers for the visit and kind words
Date: 1/25/2016 9:18:00 AM
You have skills my friend.
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Old Man Emu
Date: 1/25/2016 12:41:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I think I have a fair way to go. Good of you to visit. Cheers, Craig
Date: 1/24/2016 1:39:00 PM
Beautiful, such vivid description
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Date: 1/14/2016 12:54:00 PM
Magnificent Craig... '...I curl up on my mum and suck on my thumb,' I gotta say I didn't see that coming! Powerful phrasing and electrifying imagery. BRAVO!! Best wishes, Keith
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Old Man Emu
Date: 1/15/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thanks Keith, A grand journey it must be.

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