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Killer

Killer was nervous that day after he’d done away with the uncle he’d made pay for the evil he’d suffered long ago one day. His hands shook. His body quivered. What was done was done. Payback delivered. The blood had been sickening and the vomit that followed smelled like hell as his guilt he swallowed. Scared now he’d left the scene after wiping everything clean. He jumped in his car. He thought he’d erased the scar. But tears welled up as uncontrolled they fell down his cheeks and his throat began to swell. He couldn’t stop now. He drove faster and faster around each dangerous curve on two wheels he swerved. As in his mind he relived his crime suddenly he had to turn on a dime. When he snapped back to reality it was too late. The eighteen-wheeler he faced sealed his fate. Now nothing but the truth he never would tell because Killer soon would be paying in Hell. By: Carole O’Terry Duet Copyright: 6/18/2020 “All rights reserved”

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Date: 8/11/2020 1:36:00 PM
this has GREAT IMPACT Carole. Very well done. Think I will fave it same as Caren has done!
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Carole Duet
Date: 11/14/2020 9:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. You like the drama? Carole :D
Date: 7/3/2020 4:17:00 AM
WOW! This is a FAVE for me Carole. I love it!
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/15/2020 2:54:00 PM
Thank you, Caren, for the FAVE and the WOW. lol So glad you liked "Killer". Carole :D
Date: 6/25/2020 4:08:00 PM
Oh dear.. What a lovely piece you have here. Your craft is definitely seasoned with lots of creativity. Great poem.
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/1/2020 11:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Funom...and thank you for dropping by to read "Killer". Carole :D
Date: 6/20/2020 3:55:00 AM
This fast moving poem appeals to our emotions, Carole. Taking the law in one's hands cannot be condoned, while even confirming that 2 wrongs don't make a right... and yet... I can understand the years of trauma 'killer' has had to endure. This time Justice did not dally, as has often been the case!! ~ Regards // paul
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/20/2020 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, Paul, for your very thoughtful comment on "Killer". Your insight is "right on". Carole :D
Date: 6/19/2020 6:29:00 AM
That was a swift payback for the killer...a story well told, Carole.
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/19/2020 3:33:00 PM
Hi Vijay! Yes, it was...swift justice. Thanks for reading. Carole :D
Date: 6/18/2020 9:30:00 PM
Wow! Great!
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/19/2020 3:34:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. I'm glad you liked "Killer". Carole :D

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