"TCHAIKOVSKY'S OVERTURE"
I watch her paint the lions under the trees
I listened to her sing the glory of love
I seen her playing on the frozen lake where
her sister fell in and became deaf
today she put a pigeon out of it's misery
because it had been shot
it was then she spoke of
heaven.
today she played the piano with her mother
today she screamed at the female who
stole her bible
today she walked in on her parents making
love and didn't understand
today she saw another female make a move
on her father
today she pushed her enemy off the slide
incidently she shouted she was from Russia.
now she stands by the red apples with a bow
in her
hair.
do you expect me to tell you her next move?
do you expect to find love from those that
preach it?
there's never a convertible inside a cracker
jack box.
keep an eye out for the next line.
By: Chicano Eddie
3-13-2017
Cascading in a rush
With a vociferous gush
Big drops on the crown
Poured steadfastly down
Amidst lightening and storm
And a loud thunderous sound
Playful restless
With a mischievous step
Banging at the door
Of her little head
A frenzied lot
Of deafening knocks
Raring roaring
Persistent, non stop...
Deftly she caught some
Coalesced them into a poem.
Earlier submitted for
Name of the contest:
CREATE AN IDIOM
Now submitting for
A natural metaphor
Date Jan 20 2017
Writers note
This poem, ( title changed) incidently my first submission at poetry soup last year, signifies the surge of words, a metaphoric downpour engulfing the mind of a poet , deafening in their intensity.The poet's creative skills weave out a poem from this divine gift, rapping at the doors.
Once upon a time recently
To dentist went confidently
He gave huge novacaine
Suppose to ease my pain
To my heart went incidently
The dentist chiseled tooth away
I didn't want to play rest of day
The morning after~Oh! well
I'll just say, upon pain did dwell
But money to him still will pay
Sponsor: Black-Eyed Susan
Contest: The Worst Morning After
Written Monday, July 22, 2013
One week since the procedure
and I am still having some pain..
My heart still hasn't settled completely
either..
little lips, little kiss, leading down, down,
suckel on the tender nippels, moans softly let out,
fingers trailing, lips following, still leading down,
jeans receding, blood is beating, hard into stretched skin,
tip of tounge and tips of lips, teasing gentle head,
show some pleasing, cloths dropping off the edge of the bed,
ready screaming, still whispering, so no one does awake,
hands are touching, eyes are seeing,
skin thats perspiring,
passion feeling, night is falling,
still we're seeking, evermore,
that feeling, that extacy, screaming more,
tounge tickels gentel skin,
small fingers gently guide,
then its in,
"ready" question asked,
lips connect as an answer fast,
like ocean waves, got the movement down,
passion sweating from the crown,
rocking incidently to the heart beats sound,
ohmigosh, now screaming out,
quietly screaming out,
unready nevermore,
eyes seeking eyes in the dark,
lips connecting with flying sparks,
skin melting, a mix of one,
tears spilling, the reason: none
unspoken words released in gasps sworn,
yours to please, evermore
perspective suddenly shifted
lifted spirit high, as emotion &
guilt incidently die. don't cry,
stay, make a place & lay-
sleep if you may.
no matter; today; i say;
far far away.