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YOUR BETTER END To be To stare To contemplate To risk To dare Once and again To trust To leap A Jump of faith To fall To land No one can say To forgive To forget Or try again To breathe To love Feel whole and place The fears The doubts To rest and then To grow To become Your better end *** January 20, 2017

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Date: 7/25/2017 3:19:00 PM
Well Written... Well done!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 9/26/2017 11:27:00 AM
Thanks Adeyemi :)
Date: 7/25/2017 9:39:00 AM
Very nice, Claudia!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 9/26/2017 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 7/25/2017 9:39:00 AM
Fabulous.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 9/26/2017 11:25:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Michael :)
Date: 2/3/2017 1:28:00 AM
I found this in the best poems list! And such a sweet accent too! Well done, Claudia, great poem!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/3/2017 6:20:00 PM
It is there??? wow... Thank you Budgie!!! :D
Date: 1/24/2017 12:36:00 AM
You make wonderful readings to your poems, and your accent is musical and singing, I love it, always have :) So no worries!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/24/2017 3:37:00 AM
Thank you my sweet friend! It took me this long to have the nerve to try my hand at recording it. I'm happy you liked... (and i hate my accent - lol :P )
Date: 1/22/2017 8:02:00 AM
Very lovely piece of writing, Claudia:) I can feel the rise and fall of lines:) a 7:)by the way, love your name:)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/22/2017 8:36:00 AM
Thank You Jo!!!! (If people disregard my accent, I will do an audio of it :P - hehehe) - And I kind of like my name too :) Hugssssss
Date: 1/21/2017 8:46:00 PM
This is really nice, Claudia. I like the fast smooth flow of it! Great message.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/21/2017 9:39:00 PM
Thanks a lot Andrea!! I really liked writing it :) Hugs
Date: 1/20/2017 7:14:00 PM
To never fear to love again my first thought after reading your poem
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/20/2017 7:36:00 PM
To love, to take chances, to try the unknown - Yes!!! Thanks for your comment, Frederic :)
Date: 1/20/2017 1:15:00 PM
Love this one Claudia <3 As I said before it is the perfect list for living :)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/20/2017 6:48:00 PM
Awww... Thanks a lot Sara! I really liked this poem too :D :)
Date: 1/20/2017 1:14:00 PM
Well penned Claudia...best wishes
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/20/2017 6:43:00 PM
Thanks a lot Joseph! :)
Date: 1/20/2017 11:04:00 AM
Wow Claudia, I agree with Tim, one of your best and a definite 7 and fav!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/20/2017 11:24:00 AM
:D thank you Darren! ***Doing happy dance here*** both your comments made my day <3 :*
Date: 1/20/2017 10:26:00 AM
This is so beautiful Claudia....one of your best...a fav
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/20/2017 11:22:00 AM
Yayyyyyy!!! Thank you Tim!!! :* <3

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